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Hey Dreamwalker!
Will you review my poetry?
I need harsh reviews badly for I am using them as an english assignment!
Thanks!

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Alright. anymore reviews people?
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Anymore reviews people?
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Hey Dreamwalker x
Could you please review my fiction?
It's only short!
Thanks x

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Hi Dreamwalker!

Could you please review my story? There's three Chapters but i'd like the review on the last two please.

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Thanks!

Afeefah :D
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Wow I haven't checked this thing in awhile... well anymore reviews?
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Hi there!

Could you review a poem of mine? It's written for a contest and I just want to know if there's anything to correct.

Link: topic49516.html

Thanks! :D
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You can be as evil and harsh as you want. Tear it to shreds :)

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Do you do lyrics?

Thanks much! :D

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Hi!
I was wondering if you would be willing to review my entry for Rosie Unicorn's contest. It's PG & Fantasy Fiction.
~Dakota

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Looking for peeps to review my novel:)

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Hi,
Will you please review my entry to Rosey Unicorn's contest?

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Genre: Other Poetry
Title: The Mad Psychiatrist

Thanks! :D
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