Manny's Review Shop

Hello! Come on in, I promise not to bite. I'm pretty relaxed on the whole critiquing thing, so feel free to ask away, but before you do that make sure to see exactly what I can/can't do for you.

What I will critique:
Fantasy
Science Fiction
Romance
Historical
Non-Fiction
Action/Adventure
Fanfiction

What I won't critique:
Pretty much anything not in the fiction area. I don't have any real useful knowledge of poetry in any form, scripts, or artwork.

Other Info:
Please tell me if you want something specific covered, mechanics (spelling and grammar), or framework (characters, plot, dialogue, etc.). If you want me to review more than one piece, I promise to do the first in the order you request it and the others as soon as time permits it. So please, request away! Make sure to leave a link, though, as I tend to get lost quite easily.

Well, I've got a short romance piece that I just recently added but would like to have checked out. Anyway, the framework and the grammar both need to be looked into. In advance, thank you.

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The first has ben reviewed several times so I don's expect much there.

Don't worry about grammer too much. Focuse on chaterization, structure,flow etc.

hello, I'm entering a competition,l the writing has to appeal to boys, so could you please focus on that?

[Remember, focus is what boys want to read... Thank you!]

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