Kalli's Critique Call Center

I'd very much like a review please. I have only one review and I'm new Sorry I cannot separate each chapter, but please try to edit around it. Also, I am aware that I have no skills with semi colons ^^ topic40958.html

Done. Anyone else?

*dials phone number*

Hey

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Yea, I have something I'd love for you to review ! Awesome call centre, this is.

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Yea. It's awesome. Awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awes-

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Huh?

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Yes, I can shut up if you want...

xD

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post505845.html#505845

It's for the CIA contest.

^^

XxxDo

Oooh, thanks for calling! ^_^

Next, please!

topic43953.html

It's a lyric poem, titled Pleading to a Wet Sun.

Thanks in advance.

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