Kalli's Critique Call Center

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What I critique?

Fiction - I especially have a partial for Romance at the moment, but I will also look at Action and Adventure, Historical Fiction (although I am not a great expert when it comes to historical facts) and Other Fiction.

If you ask me to I may also do Fantasy (as long as it's not all elves and dwarfes) and Sci-Fi, but I only have little experience with those, so I'd call someone else for help.

I do not critique Fan Fiction.

Poetry - Poetry's wonderful. I'll be very glad to review.

Other

Lyrics - I love lyrics! Hand 'em over!

Art & Photography - I'm no expert, but I can tell you whether I like it or not and what I think could be done better.

Non Fiction - Only if you ask me to.


Does that answer your question?

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Hello?

I have a story called Anniversary, if you're interested. It's romantic.

Done.

Any other callers?

*Poke*

Part One
Part Two

Rip it to shreds?

~JFW1415

Finally completed. Any more callers?

I'd love it if you could do this. It's long, (the first part is 16 pgs) but I'll give you 50 pts to do it.

www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic30959.html

Done! I have time now, so if you want a crit you won't have to wait that long

Up!

It's a lyric, and I want it to be awesome, seeing as it's going to be the main track of my musical.

I have this poem. Can you review it? topic32751.html

Okay, this thing is up again and I'd love to do some crtiques. I'm trying to get back into the swing of things and now that my Christmas break has started I have time.

Pass me the food please!

topic39240.html
I've got quite a few reviews on it already. And I'm so thankful to those that have reviewed it I'm just looking for a few more opinions before I revise it. I'm aware that there's a lot of mistakes, I'm just looking for some overall opinions
Thanks so much
-Kirsten xxx
Don't worry if it takes a while, I don't mind ...x

Done. Anyone else?

Would you take a look on my poem Have An Ice Day? I just edited a little.

Thank you very much!

Demeter xxx

Finished. =)

Could you please review the revised version down the bottom of my thread here
topic40936.html

I'm also looking for advice on whether you think it could be included in some larger story, rather than just by itself. Thanks in advance.