Need Works to Review for #NaNoRevMo

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Hello - I see you're needing a review, you've come to the right place!

Here's just some information about my reviewing style and so forth:

Things I WILL review:

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GENRES:

Science Fiction
Historical Fiction
Fantasy
Romance
*Teen Fiction
mysteries
Action/Adventures

LITERARY TYPES:

*Lyrics
Novels
Poetry
Short Story

*Only if you really need me to...


Things I WILL NOT review:

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GENRES:

Culture
Fanfiction
Film
Health
Politics
Review
Science
Spiritual

LITERARY TYPES:

Art
Articles
Script


What must I do to repay you for reviewing my work?

your soul Nothing, really :-) If you would like to return a review, that would be great! But I do not require anything :p

How do I request a review from you?

Well, just copy and paste a link to the work you would like to be reviewed below, and if you have a certain thing you'd like me to look for or critique on (i.e : detailed vs. overview, character-focused vs. plot-focused, etc.)


LET'S GET TO IT THEN :-)
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Hey there, could you please review:

Chalice of Life: Chapter 7

and

Chalice of Life: Chapter 8

Thanks in advance!




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@yizhongt

Would you like me to start from the beginning, or just review those two chapters?
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formally lylas.




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@lylas, it would be great if you could drop a review from the beginning, but if you don't have the time, the last two are just fine




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Okay! I'll try and read from the beginning, just know it'll take me some time to get through to chapter 7-8!

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I'll try to get to it Monday! I'm going camping this weekend, but hopefully I'll get to it!
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HI would you please review my work The Ripper ? Who is that ? (chapter 1) (there is also a 2nd chapter ) and thanks




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I'll try and get to it tomorrow after I do @plathonstone 's request. (I keep forgetting I have to tag people so they get a notify)

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When you'll have some time to spare please review this piece.

Ludwig. (chapter 2)

This is second chapter. I think it would be better for critique if you read first one as well (400+ words).
Thank you in advance.




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Hi Felistia here, I would love if you could review my story. I need someone to review all the chapters. Most people only read the first three. It seem a bit boring in the beginning, but it gets better as you get into it. Please can you go through and read all the chapters. :D :D
It is called Search for the Ruby of Fire and is a fantasy\ action adventure\ a bit fan fiction, not really it's there because the story has something's similar to the Wings of Fire. It has dragons as the main characters and won't give away anymore. It has no 16, 18, L, M, V tags just to let you know. Here is the link. :D :D :D
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Search-for-the-Ruby-of-Fire-Chapter-1-124445




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@felistia, I might be able to do a general review on one of the chapters, but I'm severely busy right now and I don't think I have enough time to be reviewing a whole novel, sorry :-(
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