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I'm looking for opinions on "Ch1: The Nomad Boy (p1)" filed under "Resonance of Misko." So far I've gotten some good pieces of advice and a lot of praise but I'm really looking for someone who can pinpoint flaws and beat it to a pulp, heheh. Any thoughts on it would be amazing :D

Here's a direct link so you don't have to sift through my portfolio: work.php?id=100435
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This is the first chapter of my book Risk. This is the un edited version. Please check it out and leave a review.
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CandidDreamer wrote:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=100496
This is the first chapter of my book Risk. This is the un edited version. Please check it out and leave a review.


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Don't know if its too late, but I would like a review on Runaway Ch. 1




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Hi Animal. I recently posted the beginning of a story I'm working on, and would like a review for it please. :)

work.php?id=100542

And I also posted a little essay/speech thing-a-ma-bob, I'd like a review on that to if possible.

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Thank you so much!
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work.php?id=100736 If you're comfortable with short stories, I'd really appreciate it.



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