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primordial origin of all creation
Was I dead before I was born, in this place? Because, if death is like the before, why should I fear it?
Prince Charmed
He is smitten.
The Curly Headed Boy
A poem about a teenage girl and her forbidden love with a curly-headed boy that she holds close to her heart.
As Lowly As Murder
Hi, this is another piece, I really liked this, so I thought I'd put it up for reviews. Any review is welcome!
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As Lowly As Murder
Wow! This piece had me hooked from the very beginning! At the end, I found myself wondering more and more about the world you've set up. I'm curious to know ...
Chapter 1: Before the beginning
Hi! This is my first review on here so sorry if my wording is a little weird! First off, I thought your story was good! The reveal of the diary ...
Before
So this is the first segment (?) of something I've been working on. It's kinda like a prologue I'd say, but I plan to update with more segments!
LET IT BURN FOREVER
Aster! I have arrived. Finally. I read through this and I thought of a relationship that hurts the narrator but it brings them such gratification? I don't think that's the ...
Chapter 1: Before the beginning
I enjoyed this chapter. Manas and the protagonist have a believable sibling dynamic, and the diary is probably the part that made me most curious about the larger story. The ...
