Young Writers Society

shadows before the sun, and someoneturns out the lightsdarkness settles on the stage: a new act has begun.cue – daylightlet a shred of pale grey fill the sky.I can see ...

You draw me into your words Your thoughts, and your poetry With your blue eyes And I love them. It’s almost a seduction dance When you look at me across ...

I'm really not sure about this one, so any constructive criticism would be more than welcome. Light This silhouette lies beside me Faint curves of silver amidst an eternity of ...

any kind of constructive criticism would really help, also anyone got any ideas for a title? Day's brightness has barely passed And the shadow already holds it's sway Within my ...

I was disappointed with this poem when I wrote it months ago. But reading it again tonight made me feel everything all over again. So, I supposed I expressed it ...

I don't think I put the right words in here to express what I feel... and nobody will know what I feel. So enjoy, comments greatly appreciated... Fate by Elizabeth ...

Cut my skin with your razor blade Cut me from behind because your sun doesn't shine Take away from me my innocent mind You take away from me my sunshine ...

My alarm clock woke me this morning With its infernal, hated pounding in my mind, I huddled beneath my thick blankets Trying to gather the pieces of a beautiful dream ...

This is in the same vein as my other poem, Gaol, though hopefully this one will get more feedback! I'm not sure it's as strong as the other, but there ...

Lord, let it rain. Let it rain upon my tearful face So both our tears can slide together And become one.

clockwork I wish I could see the inner workings of your mind you claim to have misplaced me behind gears and screws that pop off at the ends, loudly- that ...

OK, now it's in the right place I hope! A Shortcut To The Sea The velvet-soft Quiet Of Night. My skin thrills At the touch of Chill wind. Steep steps ...

my eyes come undone. it's the sun, the sun has come. and my thoughts are one. how come? how come you breathe so slowly? short breaths, softs breaths, like they ...

silence and words part playing hide and seek in the dark it’s your surprise i litter you with that blue light and catch your eyes just right the game is ...

i watch as you lick your lips wet and take a drag from your cigarette that filthy habit that disgusting routine how do you make it taste so sweet like ...