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Lord, Let It Rain

by Snoink


Lord, let it rain.

Let it rain upon my tearful face
So both our tears can slide together
And become one.


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Fri Nov 11, 2005 6:08 am
Snoink says...



It's too short for criticism, lol. :P




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Fri Nov 11, 2005 12:08 am
backgroundbob says...



Yes, I like it as well, though only as a change from the normal: too many would make me bored of them

not a lot of criticism can be offered, can it? :)




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Tue Nov 08, 2005 10:54 pm
Once Upon A Dream says...



I like this! I have a bunch of poems like this as well, so I understand the reason behind the short, simple verse. Clean, clear emotion, simple but deep and very nice.





If I seem to wander, if I seem to stray, remember that true stories seldom take the straightest way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind