It's too short for criticism, lol. 
Lord, let it rain.
Let it rain upon my tearful face
So both our tears can slide together
And become one.
Yes, I like it as well, though only as a change from the normal: too many would make me bored of them
not a lot of criticism can be offered, can it? 
I like this! I have a bunch of poems like this as well, so I understand the reason behind the short, simple verse. Clean, clear emotion, simple but deep and very nice.
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