Hey you're new!! :thumb: Hiiiiiii! *waves enthuastically*
What got me was the fact that the first and third stanzas do not rhyme while the middle stanza does. :-s Maybe its some sort of a style - but I didn't really get it.
I agree with Once upon a Time it does use quite overused verbs (considering it's a poem where the narrator is being bullied, teased etc.) Be original- it's much more fun!!
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