Hello again Twit!
I'm back to request another review. We had a great back and forth about my "prologue" so I came back for more of your awesome opinions. Would you take a look at Chapter 1 for me?
(Part 1) work.php?id=95055
(Part 2) work.php?id=95059
I split it up because it was a little long. (~ 4,500 words). I tried some different things this time and I'm looking for good feedback. Anyone else viewing this thread is welcome to comment as well. Thanks!
(Congrats on completing your Essay btw)
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