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Sat Nov 28, 2009 6:28 pm
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Lauren2010 says...



*blows dust of thread*

Lauren's back in the reviewing business! :D

Do ask me to review:
Novels! (I love following novels, and I'll catch up on chapters if you're far in)
Fantasy Fiction
Science Fiction
General Fiction
Historical Fiction
Romantic Fiction
Action and Adventure Fiction
Scripts
Other

You can ask me to review (though I am much less experienced in):
Poetry
Non-Fiction
FanFiction (If I'm not familair with the topic, I'll be less of a help.)

Do not ask me to review (because I know very little about):
Lyrics
Drawings/paintings/computer generated art
Photography

The way it works is you post a link in the thread and I'll get on to reviewing as soon as possible! If I follow your novel, further notification of updates can be done via PM rather than posting here.
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Sun Nov 29, 2009 2:44 pm
Young gun says...



Let me know if this is a good story:

topic51881.html
Too bad we don't live to experinece death




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Sun Nov 29, 2009 10:25 pm
Lethero says...



Here's a fantasy story. This is Ch2, but if you want to read the others they should be under the related posts with it.

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Fly, Fight, Win . . . in Air, Space, and Cyberspace.
-Air Force Mission Statement-

Integrity First
Service Before Self
Excellence In All We Do
~Air Force Core Values~

*Lethero*




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Thu Dec 03, 2009 6:25 pm
*coco says...



Hey Lauren, do you do romantic fiction? If so, could you please check out my story when you're not too busy, I'd love to hear what you think of it so far. Here are the links:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53716.html (chapter 1)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53746.html (chapter 2)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53800.html (chapter 3)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53888.html (chapter 4)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic54024.html (chapter 5)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic54589.html (chapter 6)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic55095.html (chapter 7)

Thanks so much!
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Sun Dec 27, 2009 1:33 am
Lauren2010 says...



I've got loads of free time recently. Come on with the review requests :D

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Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:49 pm
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LookUpThere says...



Okay. topic58409.html . The Janitors - Prologue. COuld you please review.

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TheNewHero coincidentally would review your work as well. Contact TheNewHero, help him learn the art of reviewing. Let him offer his fiction based mind to you poems and or fiction.




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Tue Jun 08, 2010 7:12 pm
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Lauren2010 says...



I'm opening up again for requests! :D
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Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:57 am
Attolia says...



Hey, just saw that you had a thread on here. Cool :D

Anyway, chapter four is upp, would love a review whenever you can get the chance

topic66023.html

thanks a million!
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Mon Jul 05, 2010 4:41 am
Maddy says...



Hey Lauren :D
Very much appreciated if you would take the time to review an excerpt from my novel, Faith. It’s a realistic fantasy with an apocalyptic feel.
Link: post733857.html
Thank you!
-Maddy
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This awesome post bought to you by me. :)




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Mon Jul 05, 2010 11:21 pm
Lauren2010 says...



Just got home from vacation, I'll get to your requests as soon as possible Attolia and Maddy! :)
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Tue Jul 06, 2010 3:46 am
EmmVeePi says...



You say novels. Does that mean exclusively novels? If not, here is a short that I would very much appreciate a review on. Thank you for your time, it is much appreciated. MVP topic66512.html




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Tue Jul 06, 2010 7:13 pm
Day says...



Here is the second chapter of a novel I'm writing.

post734418.html#p734418

A note is that you DO NOT need to read the first chapter because every chapter it will switch between two characters. Thus this chapter is completely unrelated, as of now, to the first chapter. If you plan on reading future chapters than it will make much more sense if you read the first one.
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Mon Aug 09, 2010 1:35 am
blackbird12 says...



Could you review this for me? Thanks!

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I would have risen from the ground.

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Wed Aug 11, 2010 5:09 pm
gsppcrocks10 says...



Hey Lauren! *waves* Think you could review this for me please and thank you?

topic68154.html
Just another quack spouting psychobabble.

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Mon Sep 26, 2011 5:09 pm
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I'm back open for business! Request away!
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