Hi! raindrops is back again. Then I shall dive right to it.
I used to say I strongly believed, argued and passionately fought for, the idea that being alone, single, can have an array of possibilities, positive sides.
believed, argued, and passionately fought, for the idea
But wait, I'm not actually sure about the fought, for part, so maybe just ignore it.
"being alone - single, can have" , this is another way to write it, to omit multiple commas.
"array of possibilities and positive sides" , there are only two subjects here so using a comma is grammatically incorrect, right?
I see that Honora also pointed this out, so I'm just quoting it again to imply I have similar opinion with hers.But when night fell I would hear the silence grow around me, feel it possessing me from the inside and I wouldn't have time to brace myself for the horrid feeling of incompletion and senseless existence that would catch me with overpowering force, making my throat shrink and my mind tight.
How about using Neither am I for the second phrase, hmmm, both are okay though, so actually nvm haha.You are not perfect, but I am not either
Hmmm, I dream of this too, not necessarily with a loved one though, I dream of it with my collection of books.But every single day I wake up in the morning , thinking of you, happy for no good reason, and dream of my future, of my imperfect life and your imperfect marriage to my imperfect true love.
Honestly, at first it sounded weird, but it gets better the more I read it.Life is imperfect, but there is something perfect to be found in the imperfect.
Okay, so I was a bit conflicted after reading this short article then re-reading the title. Because the man talks about LOVE, but then where is GRACE. So originally I thought, he refers his love to a woman, but could this actually be to God. This could also means that he's loving affection is GRACE, but isn't that a bit far - or is this just my point of view. I'm conflicted. Yet, nice work again.
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