Yes, 'tis flash-fiction to be sent to some flash-zine, I figure
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Dear Hazelgreen,
and thank you for the lovely reaction!
Alas, the ending isn't a cliffhanger, it's supposed to be a 'twist ending', like with the other professor Hosselhoff story. I had dreamed these two stories the other night and upon waking jotted them down immediately.
PM me when you need a review:)
OMG.
What a cliffhanger to leave it on!!!! when I first started reading, I was like...ok, eccentric scientist, skeptical peasants, what could happen? I can't wait to see if you have any more!
Only one thing i noticed -
Did you mean to say calculations?
Other than that I loved it and I can't wait to see if you've got any more!