Reality

by neko

  • Poetry

Published April 24, 2012

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As I lose my already shaken touch with reality,
My emotions pile up like fallen ashes.
Why do you think this is happening?
With my crushed hopes in tow,
I run straight through the blood-red rain.
After my emotions come screaming out,
What will I see?
What will I feel?
Will it be any different?
I don’t know,
But in this hell of a world,
All the shallow things I hoped to gain
Lie broken all around me
And I cry.
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Twitch commented Comment · Apr 25, 2012

I love your imagery. You paint a picture and create a voice.

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FallenAngel97 commented Comment · Apr 24, 2012

I'm...almost in tears because of this....This is exactly how I feel ALL THE TIME. I'm always angry at everything(which is why I cut and punch/kick/bang my head into walls) and I cry myself to sleep almost every night.
Anyways.....great poem! :)
And sorry if I annoyed you with my venting....I tend to do that sometimes-_-



it's ok, death by laughter was always how i've wanted to go out
— Carina