Losing you

by neko

  • Poetry

Published March 23, 2012

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My bruised cheeks wet with tears, I hold you, bloody in the rain, Begging. Please stay by my side forever, Watching over me. I wished for the world we used to live in. Now I forget it as my body, Is engulfed by the vile darkness. But your bold voice gives me strength, And keeps the nightmares at bay. You found me alone in this hell, You held out your hand, And said we can lean on each other. Until the bitter end.
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ThatGuitarGuy commented Comment · Feb 19, 2014

i can't express the ability you have to put emotions on paper (or monitor in this case :P) you really have talent for making people feel things :) especially me :P it's a bit scary some times XD



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