The human question

by juulman

Published July 22, 2026

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In Poetry

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What drives a man,
to work and bleed?
To give this life his all
To walk across the barren lands
to walk nowhere at all?

We cannot think there's a promised land,
no golden city shining fair.
Each time the horizons crossed,
never was it there

Then why do we keep rending flesh
and working till we bleed?
To build a city where we stand
and make it gold indeed?

No.
For we know Gold as, sin it is
and justice as unfair
To build a golden city here's
to build a thieves lair

Why not end it then,
never take another step
never lift another brick,
nor use hand or head

To lie down, across barren sand
and watch all fade away
To look upon ye building mighty works
just to shrug and say:

"When the wiles of time have passed
nothing here will stand
Not you, nor bricks, nor empires
not even dunes of sand."

Yet somewhere there is yearning,
to be more than this.

Our curse is not our engine,
our unending human drive
Our curse is blasted reason,
the ability to see

To see the road ahead of us,
to know it's all in vain
We know where our journeys end,
and our beginnings are the same

Nothing is the word for it,
and nothing it describes
Nothing
will be the final state of life

We know the start and know the end,
The rest is to be seen
But Nothing haunts these pictures,
Next to it they are but dreams

Fireworks in deep dark night,
Astounding us with flashing light.
But the flash soon fades away, and the light goes too
and so dear reader, so are you.

Comments & reviews · 2

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drstellapepper commented Comment · Jul 23

Oh, this is a beautiful work of art 🥹 keep writing, you have a spark!

juulman replied · Jul 23

Thank you for the encouragement!

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Valkyria wrote a review Review · Jul 22

Hello! Your poem was at the top of the Green Room, so I decided to read it, and I'm glad I did! You tackle this deep and complicated topic with powerful imagery, smooth rhythm, and an open ending. You bring up the question of working toward something when it's unattainable. And then when we do build a "golden city", it's shallow and unjust. The ending doesn't have a neat resolution, yet it's satisfying just the same. I love the choice to capitalize "Gold" and "Nothing". It really shows the significance and power behind the poem. This work was a blast to read; I enjoyed it very much!

juulman replied · Jul 23

Thank you for the Review! I was actually quite unsure about the rhythm, as it switches quite frequently throughout the poem. I am glad it doesn't read as disjointed



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