Hey, Che here for a quick review!
I'll start by saying that I absolutely loved this poem. The structure, the form, the words, everything!
I thought it read rather like a song - if I were any good at singing I definitely would put this to a simple guitar and drums track, maybe a little bass too aha. I can hear it being sung in a style rather like The Smiths, if I'm honest.
I thought it portrayed love in a really different way than most poems would, and it related to writing in such a beautiful way.
I actually don't have an criticisms, which is saying something as usually I'm such a pedantic person when it comes to correcting etc. But really, I think this poem is something very beautiful and I'm rambling a bit now aren't I
Keep writing
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