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I love the pun, and the hand is well drawn!

The main thing I would work more on is contrast. This may be because of the photograph, but everything besides the fingernails are basically one mid-tone. Contrast can make or break a piece, so I would definitely work on adding darker shadows inside the ear, on the inside of the palm, and between fingers.

The fingers are a little bit blob-ish? Remember that the bones in your fingers are rectangular almost, so joints are a little bit less curved, especially since the hand in this drawing seems to be pretty skinny. That's really nitpicking though, so overall great job!

I hope this helped!

Nice drawing!

Hi Harperlouise06,

I think this is an incredible piece of art! The way you have tied the pun into the actual picture is so cool and such an out of the box thing to come up with! You are a very talented artist! Thank you so much for sharing this piece!
I can't wait to see more of your drawings!

-Delirium Nervosa

The piece is well detailed. The pun is funny, if not a little gross. I pray that is not suppose to be an actual ear on the ring. If it was, it must have one hell of a back story. Perhaps you should write a story using the sketch as a prompt?

This is really nice! c:

Hello harperlouise06! I'm not really sure if you're looking for a review on this, or if you just wanted to share - if you just wanted to share, that's totally fine, and you can feel free to ignore this!

And honestly, this is a wonderful pun, as several people have pointed out. I admit, as obvious as it may seem, I've never even thought of this! It's very original and creative, so good job on that!

Anyways, if you're interested in technical critiques, check the spoiler below.

Beautifully executed. Love the pun!

my goodness this made me laugh out loud!

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