Young Writers Society

Hi hi!

This is such a pretty collection! I love poetry that all ties together somehow! :>

The first poem is really interesting! I love the celestial imagery with the stars and souls! The transition from being a wanderer to accepting life is also really neat. It's hard to accept that things change, but this poem does well at capturing the fleeting feelings. However, it feels a little too abstract to me! I wish there was one solid metaphor or image that it latched onto instead of many.

I love the second poem! It feels like a long car ride home after spending all day outside. The contrast of adult life and childhood dreams is so relatable! I think there is a big difference between loving a person and loving the idea of them, and that's mentioned here. Though, you might consider expanding on the imagery to further that connection. For example, the cobwebs or the light switch!

The mythological references in the third poem are so cool! I never considered someone connecting with a figure in mythology, but it's really poetic when I think about it... Eris, for example, is such a tragic one to use! There's a really conversational tone to the poem, too. I don't even know what to mention here to improve this poem! It has to be my favorite out of them all! ^-^

Lastly, the fourth poem! It's hard to see the things and people you love become different, I understand. The idea that the love has no materialistic bounds is so unique to me! I think it's philosophical in a way! However, I wish the flow matched the content. Some of the lines drag on, then some of them are too abrupt. It's hard to have and keep an introspective tone when the flow is off!

These were all very good poems though! They were very timeless! I've been getting back into reading poetry, so this was nice to see a little collection!

~ Seoyoung

Hello Century!

I love the concept behind this poetry collection, so I had to stop by and leave a review. Italics can add such a lovely form of aesthetic to a poem, which I greatly appreciate. With that said, let's dive into each poem.

Poem One
This beautiful and introspective poem delves into the themes of fate, longing, and self-discovery. Your imagery and the emotions you expressed are powerful. The idea of finding what you need rather than what you want is conveyed profoundly and relatable. The overall message about the harmony of life and the timing of everything resonates deeply with me, so I greatly appreciate it. The poem's structure and flow are engaging, and the use of metaphors is captivating. However, the word "forgiveness" is misspelled in the second stanza.

Poem Two
This poem beautifully captures the bittersweet nostalgia of revisiting a past love, which is a fun contrast to Poem One but is still within the same ballpark enough to make sense together. Your imagery of dismantling cobwebs and unearthing hidden memories perfectly conveys the act of revisiting a place filled with both love and heartache. The contemplation of whether the love was genuine or based on an idealized version of oneself adds a poignant layer to the poem that makes the audience question their own perceptions. The raw, emotional honesty in the writing is truly captivating and relatable.

Poem Three
This poem resonates with me on a deep emotional level. The imagery and symbolism throughout the poem paint a vivid picture of the struggle to reconcile with one's past and the tendency to gravitate toward destructive patterns, something which I have struggled with. The comparison of humans to moths drawn to light, despite the potential for harm, is particularly compelling. The lines about hugging a bush of roses and feeling pricked and bruised, both physically and emotionally, are profoundly evocative. The reference to mythology, such as Aphrodite and Erois, adds an extra layer of depth to the poem and acts as a powerful juxtaposition. The exploration of beauty, ugliness, and self-perception culminates in a powerful and thought-provoking conclusion. Excellent job!

Poem Four
This poem resonates with deep emotions and poignant nostalgia, making it similar to poem two but different enough that it's not repetitive. The imagery of the meadow and the theme of untangling love evoke a strong sense of longing and wistfulness. The contrast between holding love near and yet feeling like strangers is beautifully depicted, capturing the complexities of relationships. The idea of intangible love and boundless hearts adds a layer of depth to the poem, making it a compelling exploration of human connection.

Overall, this was a great collection of poems about love, the past, loss, and finding yourself. It's a highly relatable collection with many themes that can be felt and understood by the audience. The metaphors and imagery were integrated well and felt quite authentic. Amazing job, Century. Thanks for publishing; I enjoyed reading.

Happy Writing!
Wist