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Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
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Falling in love with Marry
Once upon a time I knew a girl named Marry. She was a dangerous psychopath, I met her at the hospital, I fell in love with her. She had long golden hair and through her eyes I could see the whole world, or so it seemed. I used to watch her from fare away and dream about her gentle touches… she seamed like perfect being to me. One time I approached her to get to know her better and she jumped and hit me, she beaten me up with fire extinguisher… I was so messed up I ended in hospital, after two painful day I died because of my injuries and Marry spent the rest of her life in looniehouse tied to the bed…
Well...this is quite something. I will say for certain this is very unique. I've read quite a lot of works here on YWS and I don't believe i have ever run into something quite like this one before. This is definitely something that also really grabs your attention rather quick here because this is a very powerful premise here.
This one is also very interesting to try and dissect. There is an attempt to give some backstory to the main action here and a little bit of setup but then that first line itself kind of spoils the whole setup and twist anyway so I feel like perhaps you could do away with that, especially since this is so short and very to the point here.
Other that well, I think it manages to pretty effectively do what it sets out to do here and rather powerfully showcases its idea. I don't quite know what message this plot is trying to send but it certainly manages to be brutally effective and well, I think that's about all I really have to say on this piece. It was pretty short and very much to the point.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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