(This is a story I wrote for a competition with a limited amount of words allowed. I won the competition, which felt awesome, but the story may seem very quick. Sorry! Also- warnings: light horror and suspense, as well as based on a lyric from the song "Secrets").
It’s dark as I write it. If she’s followed me, it’s unlikely she’ll bother to read this. I need to finish quickly. This is my legacy. I don’t care if you adults believe it, but make sure to show your children. Warn them. Tell it as a story, a terrible, terrible story, if you must, but tell them. Making promises to the dead is bad luck, but promise me none the less.
By now you must be wondering who ‘she’ is. She is something indescribable, with big, wide eyes of vantablack that never seem to blink. Her hair is equally dark, and falls past her shoulders like frenzied rain. Oftentimes, the ends of her hair will be dyed in something scarlet and dry. Yes, it’s blood. She’ll tell it’s not, and she’ll cock her deathly-white head in confusion and you’ll want to believe her, but you can’t. And she’s not really a ‘she’. I believe her to be genderless, ageless, and merciless.
Pray you don’t meet her. God forbid you speak to her. Lord have mercy if she decides to ‘trust’ you.
She’ll observe you- for days, months, and maybe even years. You won’t notice, she’ll just be another face in the shadows. Know this: that branch that tapped your window last night was no branch. The creaking on the stairs wasn't mere dilapidation. The child walking slowly behind you, your entire journey home, was no coincidence.
Whatever you do, don’t meet her eye. That is a universal sign of trust- you must never trust her. If you trust her, she’ll choose to trust you next.
But oh, if you do, she’ll stroll right up to you. She’ll be wearing a plain black dress, with three buttons against her chest. Two somewhat muddy white stockings will hide the hundreds of little scars down her legs, and the foot of her shoe will be completely flat. I don’t believe her to have toes. Her fingers, as she reaches to shake your hand, will resemble claws. Don’t be polite as I was, and assume it to be some sort of deformity. Ask her about it. If you’re lucky, she’ll stare at you for a moment, then turn and walk away. If not, she’ll smile, pulling a long mouth into a pointy grin. When she does so, you may as well be dead.
She’ll ask you to kneel down if you’re tall, or if you’re not, she’ll lean over and whisper into your ear, “Can you keep my secret?” And, dear God, don’t agree. Don’t choose to humour the little girl. Tell her no. Tell her no, walk away, and never look back. With any luck, you’ll never see her again.
However, if you have said yes, you can never take it back. If you try to, you’ll end up like me. She’ll beam at you, and you will feel amazing. Her smiles are like drugs. I’m afraid I overdosed.
Then, she’ll put her arms around your neck in a hug, though consider it more like an attempt at strangling you. She’ll murmur something, so quietly you’ll ache to hear it, and you’ll wish you never did.
She’ll smile again, and you’ll feel something akin to fear.
Next day you’ll realize that she is very protective. Every stranger or friend that offends you is placed under her curse, and she’ll glare, a horrific, evil glare, unfit for a child’s face-
(Oh my. It seems I have I have been found out. I’m a fool to have believed I could remember without screaming. She’ll be coming for me. Soon.
I must hurry). Yes, she’ll glare, but she’ll do worse. She’ll hurt them, hurt them in terrifying ways! The artists will paint scarlet! The fighters will battle themselves! The writers will direct their own ends!
And you will be blamed.
You see, she did tell you a secret that day. Her name. And as you cry out how you never did it- how she did- everyone will stare. Because you were the only one to know her name. The only one alive.
She’ll approach you, be it in the police station or wherever you’re hiding, and she’ll frown.
“You told my secret,” she’ll hum, titling her head like an angel. “You can’t keep my secret anymore.”
Because-
(She’s here. She’s here. I’m sorry. Tell them all I’m sorry!)
“Two can’t keep a secret, if one of them is dead.”
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