The story so far: Five human children have been stranded in the Digital World and tasked to reach the Forest Terminal, deep in the Land of Forests. On their way there, they each have found a Human Spirit of the Legendary Warriors, stored in their D-Tectors. These allow them to turn into Digimon. In addition to the Human Spirits, there also exist the Beast Spirits, more powerful but harder to control. The group split up so Kouji and JP could follow the Gotsumon who managed to acquire Garmmon, Kouji's Beast Spirit.
-Kouji-
Garmmon was faster than him. Obviously.
The Beast Spirit not only had four legs to power it forwards, but also, for some unexplained reason, wheels on its heels that helped it over flat terrain. With every step he took, Lobomon could feel it slipping further out of his reach. Frustration seeped into his thoughts.
He’d already run low on energy after the fight against Gigasmon, and a numbing fatigue spread through his body. Nonetheless, he followed Garmmon up a hill that led away from the coastline. Above him, Beetlemon mirrored his path. The other Spirit Warrior caught up a while ago but hadn’t said anything. From his slightly irregular flight, Lobomon concluded that they were both near their limit.
Behind the hill was another one of the forests for which the Land of Forests earned its name and for the first time, things were looking up. The thick undergrowth was hindering Garmmon’s movement. Good.
Despite the trees blocking his view, Lobomon knew exactly where Garmmon was. As a much more agile and nimble Human Spirit, Lobomon began gaining on it. The treetops soon were so dense that only the buzzing sounds of wings reminded him of Beetlemon’s presence.
It happened when Lobomon was running over an arching bridge, his feet thudding over the wood planks. There was a squawk and Junpei fell out of the sky in front of him. The soft grass around the riverside cushioned his fall. For a long second, Lobomon wanted to just continue onwards, but then a feeling of responsibility kicked in and he stopped to ask what had happened.
That was a mistake.
The instant he came to a halt, his exhaustion caught up with him and he staggered on his feet. It was impossible to hold on to the transformation. Glowing fractal code surrounded him. Kouji reached for a low-hanging branch, but a mind-numbing fatigue locked his muscles and he collapsed next to the tree, unable to catch himself.
Well, now he knew what had happened to Junpei. How long had they been chasing Garmmon now?
Kouji tried to get into a more comfortable position, but waves of tremors rolled over his body and his limbs shook uncontrollably. He gave up on comfort and rested his head against the tree root. He’d been transformed for too long; they both had.
The river close by was flowing peacefully and its quiet gurgling was trying to lull him to sleep. Birds were singing and a soft breeze rustled through the trees. But Kouji had no time for sleep. As soon as he felt rested enough, he grabbed the branch and pulled himself up. He looked around and spotted Junpei by the riverbank splashing water into his face.
The older boy heard the movement and turned back to ask, “You okay?”
Kouji made a non-committal noise and trudged to the river to drink something. From the position of the sun, he figured it was a couple of hours past noon, and the empty feeling in his stomach reminded him that their food and money were back in the Gotsumon village.
“Ugh, I’m so hungry,” Junpei whined, falling flat on his back. It sounded so much like his usual complaining, no matter how valid it was now, that annoyance sprang up around Kouji like a shield.
“Then look for something to eat,” he snapped, wiping wet strands of hair out of his face.
Junpei returned in kind and sent him an annoyed look. “You were the one who ran off! We should go back to the others!”
Was he serious? He would have more luck finding something edible in the near vicinity than making it back to the village on an empty stomach. Case in point, an idle sweep of their surroundings showed at least three different bushes with bright fruits. The ones closest to them looked like cherries.
“I’m not going back now,” Kouji said and walked, still a bit wobbly, over to his findings to inspect their suitability as food.
“You always say that,” Junpei complained, tracking his movement curiously. The food gave him new energy and he soon appeared next to him. “Do you even know where you’re going?” Junpei managed to say between chomping on the sweet-tasting berries.
Kouji gritted his teeth. While Junpei continued to be as annoying as possible, the question itself was relevant. If he concentrated, he could still feel Garmmon somewhere, but without transforming into Lobomon he couldn’t say where exactly it was. He needed more time before he could digivolve again.
Even with the food, his strength wasn’t returning fast enough. He was about to answer Junpei, when Garmmon’s howl sounded in the distance.
“That’s where I’m going!” Kouji said and stood up to stare calculatingly into the direction of the sound.
He balled his hand around his D-Tector until his knuckles stood out white. He’d eaten enough, but he couldn’t transform yet. He hadn’t recovered enough energy!
An explosion chased the howl, and above the trees, smoke formed bulging clouds. This didn’t look good. He needed to know what was going on.
He followed the sounds into the trees and ignored Junpei’s shout of protest. The other boy could do whatever.
In the end, that meant following him, albeit at a considerable distance. While vaulting over a root, Kouji mused that Izumi was the first person he met that could run faster than him and Keisaki had a stamina that rivalled his own. Compared to them, Junpei really wasn’t the least bit athletic and continued to fall back.
The sounds of battle up ahead ended abruptly. From the sinking feeling in his stomach, Kouji knew this wasn’t a good sign. He hurried his steps. Reaching the last line of trees, he picked up a convenient stick lying in his path. An experimental swing proved that it had exactly the right length and balance. Huh. It wouldn’t stand against Garmmon, but it was too good to leave behind and didn’t slow him down too much.
Kouji switched his hold on the weapon and looked ahead. Through the tree trunks, he saw the outlines of a village. A part of its surrounding wall had collapsed as if something had crashed through it. Garmmon had been busy.
When Kouji reached the breach and struggled over the rubble, he could hear a distressed shout. He frowned and slid down the other side of the wall. He landed in a reasonably wide alley that clearly hadn’t been wide enough for Garmmon. The stone houses on either side were damaged and some walls had crumbled, littering the cobbled street with rock fragments. Dust lingered in the air.
Up ahead, Kouji heard the shout again, sounding a lot more frantic. “No! Leave me alone! I didn’t mean to do that!”
That sounded like the Gotsumon!
Behind him, laboured breathing announced Junpei, who’d finally reached the collapsed outer wall. Kouji had no time for him. He left the rubble behind and made straight for the main street further ahead.
Bird digimon of various shapes and colours had amassed at the mouth of the alley. Mixed in with the feathered creatures were some grey, two-legged dogs with long angled ears. They had disturbingly large black claws on their paw-like hands. None of the digimon looked remotely happy and Kouji made no effort to be polite when he pushed them aside to reach the inner edge of their circle.
There, curled up in a ball and both hands wrapped around his head, was the Gotsumon with the magnifying glass. So Kouji had heard correctly, it had been him shouting. He looked disturbingly small and weakened for someone who’d been a raging beast just moments ago.
Another second passed and Kouji realized what the sight reminded him of. Tommy, after he’d transformed back from Blizzarmon on Frozen Mountain. Without the uncontrollable crying though.
Unlike Tommy, Gotsumon wasn’t surrounded by friends. Instead, he had an angry village to which Garmmon had just laid waste. One of the grey dogs was standing above him and kicked him in his arched back, making him groan in pain.
Alright, Kouji had seen enough. He shoved a brown kiwi bird out of his way and stepped into the circle. “Stop that.”
“What do you want, human?” the dog digimon said, raising her clawed paw threateningly. “He was the one who attacked us! Look around you!”
Kouji mirrored the move by positioning his makeshift staff for a quick strike. He’d mostly trained in unarmed combat, but he knew how to handle a staff too. Here, he wouldn’t even need to digivolve.
“It’s over. He’s already down so leave him alone,” Kouji tried the reasonable approach once more even though time and time again, he’d seen that angry digimon and reasonable didn’t mix. This was no different. The rest of the assembly obviously thought it could get cute with him while he was focused on the enemy in front of him. But the claws of a second grey dog made a distinct clicking noise on the stone ground when it made to jump at him from behind. In a well-practiced move, Kouji spun around and slammed the wooden stick into its side. It howled in surprise and pain. He smirked. This was what he was good at.
“Anyone else?” he challenged, a hard tone in his voice. He was seething with anger inside. Gotsumon was clearly himself again and they still attacked him.
It took a few whacks with the staff before he could get his point across and by then, Junpei finally managed to join him in the circle. The heavy-set boy was rapidly taking in the situation, from Kouji and his staff, to the heap of dog digimon nursing various bruises to Gotsumon who was finally standing but holding an injured arm.
Junpei came to the same conclusion as Kouji, and anger washed away his growing frustration. “Hey! Get a grip! Has he actually injured anyone?” After another look at the beaten dogs, he clarified, “I mean Gotsumon.” As always, he surprised Kouji with immediately seeing the core of the problem. There was a lot of collateral damage, but despite the sea of angry faces, there weren’t any tears that suggested someone had died.
“No,” the wingless bird that Kouji had shoved out of the way spat out, gearing up for an outraged tirade, but Junpei was a step ahead of it.
“Great, then we’ll be on our way now,” he insisted. He turned back to Kouji and said urgently, “Let’s go!”
They clearly weren’t welcome in the village.
“You... You—” Gotsumon began, swaying on his feet.
“Not now, we’ll get you out of here first,” Junpei interrupted, but he looked a lot less confident than just a moment ago. He was banking on making a quick getaway before anyone could bring up who would pay for all the destruction. To his credit, that plan was working. As humans, they were both towering over the entire population and intimidated the crowd.
Still, Junpei faltered under the collective attention and Kouji wasn’t sure why. Normally he wouldn’t care, but right now it made them both seem less confident and that wouldn’t do. So it fell upon Kouji to find which side of the road led towards the village gate. He took a decisive step towards it, weapon in hand as a reminder that at least one of them knew how to fight.
For a moment, it looked like the masses weren’t ready to let them through, but something about Kouji’s stance and weapon-prowess had made them cautious. The first bird stepped out of the way. Behind them, the gate opening to the forest was visible.
Kouji waited at the edge of the circle and let Junpei pass them first. He didn’t trust the peace and wanted to stay close to potential troublemakers. He followed after a dazed-looking Gotsumon and never took his eyes off the watching citizens until they were well outside of the village. He decided to keep the stick, since it had saved him a transformation into Lobomon. It wasn’t that digivolving was taking a whole lot out of him, but he’d just been reminded that it didn’t come free either.
For about two minutes, they followed an overgrown path between the trees, looking for somewhere safe to have a little talk. Nobody was saying anything, not even Junpei. Kouji alternated between watching their surroundings and the Gotsumon who still had his Beast Spirit. The digimon fiddled awkwardly with the magnifying glass that he carried around his neck. Sometimes, he would look up as if he wanted to say something but didn’t find the words for it and quickly stared at the uneven ground again.
That awkwardness only came to an end when they stopped next to a large rock and had the digimon sit on it. By this point, Gotsumon was the only one still shaken and distraught.
“So,” Kouji began and crossed his arms, annoyed by the fidgeting. He almost expected to receive no answer at that cue. The last time he’d truly interacted with this Gotsumon, he’d stolen his mysterious jewel and that didn’t really make for the best conversation starter.
Gotsumon looked him straight in the eye and said, “Thank you for saving me back there.”
“It was nothing,” Kouji said because for him, it really had been nothing.
Still, Gotsumon wrung his hands nervously, making a grinding sound when rock scraped against rock and mumbled quietly, “I saw you. Earlier. You’re one of the Legendary Warriors and you didn’t even need to digivolve to... to help me.”
“Yeah, about that: what’s going on?” Junpei interrupted, feeling extremely left out of the loop. “And can you stop that?”
Gotsumon shot him an angry look, and a bright light flashed through his eyes. It was only there for a second, but Kouji straightened in alarm.
Before anything went down, the rock digimon checked himself and obediently dropped his hands into his lap. He coughed and said sheepishly, “I actually can’t remember much.”
Junpei didn’t care. “Well, we came all the way after you, so you kinda owe us an explanation.”
Which gave Kouji the perfect opportunity to ask: “Where did you find the Spirit?”
Last he’d heard was that the Spirit at the Gotsumon village was only a rumour.
Gotsumon visibly struggled to find an answer. He groaned and said, “It was encrypted on a cliff close to home. There’d been a temple of Light once, really old stuff from shortly after Lucemon’s fall. The inscription said to find three red stones to release the Spirit.”
“That’s why you took the jewel?” Kouji realized and had a strange feeling. Hadn’t the merchant that gave it to him said something about light as well? This had always been about his Beast Spirit! Good thing that they’d held onto it.
Gotsumon nodded. “And it worked! Once I put the stone in the correct place, the Spirit appeared! But after that? …I wanted to, uhm, take down Grumblemon...” Gotsumon trailed off, staring at his hands. “It’s all hazy. I only remember coming around in that village and I was suddenly so weak. I think that Garmmon drained all my energy...”
It was as good a cue as any. Kouji asked, “So are you ready to hand it over?”
Gotsumon’s eyes shot wide open. “What? No! What makes you think that?”
Lovely. That reaction honestly surprised Kouji, but he managed to keep his face completely impassive.
Junpei didn’t have this level of self-control and blurred out, “But that’s Kouji’s Spirit!”
“No, that’s my Spirit!” Gotsumon insisted, standing up on the rock to appear taller than them. His eyes flashed dangerously. “I’ve spent months unearthing it!”
Kouji paused. So far their Spirits had been conveniently lying around with nobody (except maybe the crazy Candlemon) claiming them for themselves. They simply hadn’t run into a situation like this. But Kouji knew Garmmon was supposed to be with him.
Not that he needed to say anything. Junpei was starting to get angry now. “Look, kid, we need it more than you! Remember how we saved you just five minutes ago? We’re going to save the entire digital world, so stop being so stubborn!”
“Hah! You think I’m a kid?” Gotsumon shot right back, unwilling to give ground. “I have my own plans for the Spirit! Deal with it! It’s me who’s going to save the world!”
“How? You can’t even handle one digivolution!” Junpei said, frustrated.
Gotsumon’s eyes flashed again.
No. They were emitting a continuous glow, and with his anger rising, the light got more and more intense.
“Obviously I just need practice! I’ll learn how to control it! You can’t—” He paused, and his eyes were liquid light. He tried once more, “You can’t— ugh...” His hands flew to his head and a groan escaped him. “What...?” He groaned again, a low sound that grew louder and louder. When he screwed his eyes shut, his entire body began emitting light.
“Hey, are you okay?” Junpei asked unhelpfully, at the same time as Kouji said, “I think you need to calm down.”
They traded an uncomfortable look. Then Gotsumon screamed and fractal code burst out of his body, surrounding him in a cocoon of irate data strings.
Gotsumon Beast Spirit Digivolve to...
(Gahhhh! It hurt, it hurt, it hurt. So much light, too much light, everywhere, invading, there was no way to... to...)
...GARMMON!
That was the end of conscious, focused Gotsumon.
Kouji and Junpei both hastily stepped back when the data cocoon broke open and Garmmon awkwardly tried to balance on the comparatively small rock on which Gotsumon had been standing. Despite the unexpected obstacle, it still found time to roar at them. Its eyes were radiating light, but they had a vacant, lifeless look that told Kouji reasoning would fall on deaf ears.
He had his D-Tector already in hand when Junpei shouted, “Kouji, don’t!” and for some insipid reason, inspired by misplaced trust, he actually hesitated.
Instead, the other boy summoned the data cocoon.
Execute Spirit Digivolve to... Beetlemon!
It was too late for Kouji to digivolve now because Garmmon pounced. He needed the time to jump out of the way and barely evaded the golden claws. Garmmon was fast! Faster than Kazemon! But when he rolled to his feet, Beetlemon grabbed him by the shoulders and lifted him up in the air.
Below them Garmmon roared again.
“What are you doing?” Kouji demanded but didn’t struggle. He really didn’t fancy dropping straight onto his Beast Spirit, which clearly wanted him dead.
“Lobomon would be too heavy!” Beetlemon shouted over the noise, rising higher and higher. “I thought it’s better not to fight him.”
On the ground below, Garmmon was running in an angry circle, staring up at them and howled impotently. It jumped upwards, half-heartedly trying to reach them, but its landing looked less than graceful. It took a while to pick itself up again. It didn’t send its laser attack at them. Possibly because of Gotsumon’s total lack of control. Honestly, this looked worse than when Tommy had transformed into Blizzarmon. There was not even a flicker of consciousness in these too bright eyes.
“So what now?” Kouji asked harshly. Why not fight Garmmon right now? Just moments ago, Junpei had argued for Gotsumon to relinquish the Spirit! This still was their best opportunity to take it from him.
“I don’t know! Why did he digivolve?” Beetlemon asked.
To Kouji, it had looked like Gotsumon’s anger had triggered the transformation. So much for learning to control the beast, he couldn’t even control when he digivolved.
“Does it really matter?” Kouji shouted back.
“It does because it could happen to you too!”
That made Kouji pause. He hadn’t thought of that. When Tommy had found his Beast Spirit, the kid must have known, deep down, that the fight against Scorpiomon was as good as over. Still he’d transformed into Blizzarmon with all the drama that had followed it. Would Garmmon take him over as quickly as Blizzarmon had taken over Tommy?
“Fine, we should wait until he runs out of energy again,” Kouji decided. At least that wouldn’t take long since Gotsumon hadn’t looked like he was fully recovered from his last transformation.
“Okay, I’m going to try and lure it away from the village,” Beetlemon said after a worried look back.
From that high up, they were able to see the village that they’d just left. The destruction was even more poignant from here. Kouji surveyed the forest and saw the glistening of the ocean at the horizon. A jagged mountain range trailed from the coast through the trees. It wasn’t quite high enough for snow tips but had a fair share of waterfalls making its way down the deep crags on its side. That was the direction Beetlemon took them. Despite its inability to reach them, Garmmon followed them hungrily, never taking its eyes off them.
“It’s really creepy,” Beetlemon said uncomfortably as they passed over a wide river.
Garmmon didn’t hesitate and single-mindedly struggled through the water.
“It’s like he’s not even there anymore,” he continued.
Like an animal. No, even an animal would’ve been more circumspect.
It was obvious that fatigue slowed the beast down and when it dragged itself out of the water, wet and miserable, a burst of fractal code restored Gotsumon to his usual form. “Ugh...”
Beetlemon dropped Kouji on a small hill a few meters away from the riverbank but didn’t transform back yet. He called out, “You okay now?”
Gotsumon took a moment to stop shaking. He looked up to them, confusion edged into his stone face. “What happened?”
“Oh that’s wonderful,” Beetlemon said, but wisely decided not to bring up the control issues again.
-JP-
JP struggled to remember when he’d ever felt this frustrated. Gotsumon clearly wasn’t able to control Garmmon. It even affected his normal self, and their resulting argument summoned the shiny eyes multiple times again. Thankfully, he’d run out of energy to power another digivolve. Despite all that, he refused to even consider getting rid of the Spirit. He also wasn’t ready to meet them halfway and come with them to Forest Terminal, no matter how sensible that sounded.
Gotsumon had this notion in his head that he could save the world. Well, all the power to him, but this Beast Spirit thing was clearly not working for him. He still hadn’t recovered from his recent stint as Garmmon and had barely managed to roll onto his back in the wet mud surrounding the river. His random bouts of pre-transformation glowing couldn’t be helping his recovery.
Even Kouji looked frustrated now—as in, more frustrated than usual—and asked the crucial question, “So how do you plan on saving the world?”
Gotsumon leaned back to shoot Kouji an upside-down look as if his next steps were obvious. “First, I’m going to kill Grumblemon.”
Kouji sat on a mouldy tree log, his arms crossed in his most unimpressed position yet. “And do you know where to find him?”
“Well, as Garmmon I tracked him to this forest so I’m sure he’s around here somewhere,” Gotsumon said, but it sounded less convincing than his rants about keeping the Spirit. Like any Gotsumon, he could see through the earth, but he’d said that it got considerably harder in unfamiliar terrain.
“Yeah right. He’s long gone now,” JP said. Not because he was terribly sure of that, for all he cared, Grumblemon could’ve had set up shop in this forest. He just thought this entire line of reasoning was stupid.
If a random guy could save the world, why did the mysterious woman even bother to call for some kids from the human world? JP might not be happy about it, but apparently, they had some big destiny to fulfill in the Digital World. At least they’d do a better job at it than this Gotsumon who couldn’t even control when to digivolve. Sure, Grumblemon was pretty bad, but how would getting rid of him save the world?
“That’s okay.” Gotsumon carefully sat up, wiping the wet mud from his body. As if he’d read his thoughts, he continued, “Grumblemon isn’t really the root of the problem anyway. I’m just going to get rid of his boss and I bet that’ll make him come running!”
“Wait, what?” JP said, standing as well as he tried to shift gears. Grumblemon’s boss... That was Cherubimon! The guy that was so powerful that he’d created all these black holes in the country. The guy who controlled most of the digimon that gobbled up fractal code everywhere and whose influence turned innocent people into savage monsters. Was he serious?
Gotsumon turned to him and in his yellow eyes was a determined look. “I’m going to the Dark Continent to fight Cherubimon!”
“On your own?” Kouji asked and Junpei knew from experience that his frown was covering his total surprise.
“I have Garmmon now,” Gotsumon countered as if that was all he needed to confront the bad guy. “You can go to Forest Terminal or whatever, but I’m not handing over my Spirit!” Finally, he could move without collapsing in exhaustion, and he used his newly regained mobility to walk up the slope, throwing them a superior look. “I’m going to do something for my world.”
This was crazy. JP fell in step with him, trying to find a way to stop him from running to his doom. In the back of his mind, he knew that if Kei were here, she would’ve agreed with Gotsumon. Since the Bakumon incident, she and Zoe were adamant about staying in the Digital World and helping it fight off Cherubimon, no matter what they’d find at the Forest Terminal. But at least, they weren’t alone!
“You can’t do that all by yourself!”
“Watch me.”
“You’re going to get yourself killed!”
“That’s what you think.”
“You’re going to hand Garmmon to Cherubimon on a silver platter!” And damn, they had come all this way because he had Kouji’s Beast Spirit. “Can’t you be reasonable for one second?”
“Listen, kid.” Gotsumon turned to him and pointed a stubby finger. “I’m trying very hard to be reasonable here! This is my life and my Spirit! I found it, I haven’t seen you trying to work for it, and I’m going to do this, so leave me alone!”
Then, he made a break for the trees, slipping in between where Junpei had trouble following him.
Kouji was a lot nimbler though. The other boy had walked a bit behind them without saying anything, but now he shouted, “Hey, wait!” and went after Gotsumon.
Great. More running through the forest, more stumbling over roots and more twigs snapping in his face. JP couldn’t imagine anything else that he’d rather do. He was starting to think this Beast Spirit was more effort than it was worth. Maybe they should just abandon the idea and get back to the others.
He even had the ideal opportunity to bring this up. When he finally caught up with Kouji (damn, that kid was fast), Gotsumon was nowhere in sight.
“Where’d he go?” JP asked, even though Kouji wouldn’t be standing on this clearing, looking around with trademark frustration if he’d had an answer to that.
“I don’t know. I think that he climbed that rock and vanished,” Kouji said grudgingly.
Oh yes, the other special ability of Gotsumon. There was a huge boulder in the centre of the clearing, but nowhere else to hide. Could Gotsumon walk around when they turned to stone? Maybe they could walk through the earth itself like Grumblemon could?
In any case, that was the final straw. “Well, that’s that then. Let’s go back,” said JP.
So far only Tommy had a Beast Spirit and aside from Kouji, no one else knew where to find theirs or if they were even necessary. They could figure out how to go about saving the world and suicidal Gotsumon after they reached their mandatory stop at the Forest Terminal. There, JP could also figure out if he really wanted to stay in this crazy world where nobody wanted to work in their own best interest.
But Kouji wasn’t just cold; he was also the perfect example of someone unable to work in a group.
Somehow the words ‘going back’, i.e., ruining their progress, and ‘the others’, i.e., a group he still wasn’t comfortable with, triggered an instinctive reaction in the other boy and Kouji’s face went blank in repressed annoyance.
Yeah, JP could see right through him, and he hated jerks like him. Why were they even forced to work together? Oh right. Because this world was crazy, and they were the only sane people left in it. Also, he’d rather not return to the others alone. What would Zoe say if he’d failed a mission as simple as preventing Kouji from doing something stupid?
JP sighed. Usually, he wasn’t all that great at compromising, but in this case the burden of being responsible fell onto him. Hell would sooner freeze over than Kouji change his attitude for the sake of the mission. What would Kei do to solve this mess? Hm...
“Or we could walk aimlessly around this forest looking for the guy.”
Kouji said nothing which probably meant agreement.
There were several things wrong with that plan that only gradually became apparent.
With their lull in fighting or excitement (unfortunate run-ins with roots and branches aside), JP found a prime opportunity to contact the girls and Tommy. They needed to know they were okay, that things would take longer than expected and that he was doing his hardest to convince Kouji to reunite afterwards. He pressed the correct button on his D-Tector and concentrated on Zoe. In the very short time it took to show any result, he wondered if Tommy was okay. But then his D-Tector displayed static, and all unrelated worries were thrown out of the window. What?
What did that mean? JP barely noticed that he was drifting off into a panic. Was Zoe okay? Was everything alright over at the Gotsumon village? Were they attacked again? He suddenly had to face the reality that Zoe and Kei had versatile, but rather weak digimon forms, and who knew what state Tommy was in? And here, he and Kouji were running around a forest hours away from them!
He tried to connect to either of the other two with the same result. Okay, okay. One more try to see if it wasn’t just his D-Tector malfunctioning for some reason.
A moment passed, then Kouji turned to him, holding up his white and blue D-Tector that displayed the thunder symbol, unveiled irritation on his face. “What do you want?”
“I can’t reach the others,” JP explained, trying very hard not to get annoyed at Kouji’s constant sour mood. Seriously, would it kill him to be a bit more agreeable?
For a moment, he almost expected Kouji to try as well, but the other boy just thought and then said, “Maybe it has a range limit.”
Oh.
JP hadn’t thought of that. Thoughts of Zoe in danger had run away with his mind and now he felt kind of embarrassed for jumping to the worst conclusion. Being out of range sounded far more probable. They’d even called it the walkie-talkie function.
This development just added to JP’s growing frustration. Now that he knew the worst-case scenario, he surprised himself by finding stumbling through the forest and being led around the nose by a ninja rock even less appealing than before. The group that they’d left behind didn’t have any strong fighters and he was starting to worry about them. Clearly they needed Beetlemon for protection. Damn, why hadn’t he let Anumon go with Lobomon? Kei wasn’t that great with Kouji (none of them were, now that he thought about it), but at least she had this mysterious ability to get him to agree to things that he usually wouldn’t.
As the minutes passed, JP couldn’t help but voice his displeasure with the entire situation. He was still hungry, exhaustion was setting in again, and it wasn’t like they were able to see the difference between a normal rock and a transformed Gotsumon. It didn’t help that Kouji refused to say anything about where they were heading or how long he planned to indulge in this pointless endeavour. It was making him feel antsy on top of being ignored.
They ran into another suspicious rock for Kouji to frown at. Nothing made it look different from any of the six boulders they’d stumbled across aside from a slight variation in its moss pattern. So JP offered, “How about we take a break?”
Kouji froze, balling his hands to fists. He half-turned to him and snapped, “How about you stop complaining for one minute?”
Okay, calm thoughts. Getting angry wouldn’t do him any good here. JP had his attention which was improvement already. “You have no idea if Gotsumon is still around so we should—”
It was a sign about how fed up Kouji was with everything that instead of letting him finish, he said with anger colouring his voice, “Why are you even here? You’re just slowing me down!”
“I’m here because—” Junpei paused to gather his thoughts so he wouldn’t shout out his frustration. “Someone thought it’d be better if you’re not out here alone!”
Well, even he recognized that that wouldn’t sound good to Kouji’s ears and true enough, the biting remark came. “I don’t need a babysitter! I would be better off without you!”
Alright, screw not getting angry, he had it coming! “You know what? Fine! Like you’re that great to be around. What made you this stuck up? I bet your mother didn’t love you enough!”
He was too angry to care that saying that was a bit hypocritical. He also didn’t care that Kouji flinched back. After taking another breath, JP continued, “I’ll go back to the others. You can do whatever you want,” channelling what Kouji had said on Frozen Mountain.
He paused, since maybe Kouji decided to be reasonable about this, but the other boy’s face was devoid of any emotion. With a chilling look in his eyes, he turned around and walked away, soon vanishing between the trees.
JP let him go. He was so done with him and had nothing more to say. He collected himself and started walking into the opposite direction.
Seriously! All this time and he was trying to accommodate this jackass (against his better judgement even!), and this was how he repaid his efforts? Screw him being a decent fighter and another human stranded in this world. Kouji would realize soon enough where that left him. Let’s see how he put up against a swarm of digimon without help.
JP would apologize to Zoe later, after he made sure that she was okay. Once he got into range again, he also needed to tell the others about Kouji running off on his own and how that was actually a good thing. After all, they’d stepped up their teamwork and he doubted that they would need Lobomon in future fights.
JP was still silently fuming through all the unfairness when he suddenly realized that this particular rock looked shockingly familiar.
He stopped and looked around. He’d been so busy stomping away from Kouji that it only now occurred to him that he had absolutely no idea where he was. He had no map and no money. And he still couldn’t reach the three humans that were worth a damn in this world...
“Gah! So hungry,” he proclaimed to the heavens and collapsed against the boulder.
What were his options? A look to the sky told him that the better part of the afternoon was already over. Could he even make it back to the Gotsumon village before nightfall?
Well, there was that village in the forest somewhere, but with the scene Kouji (gritted teeth) and that damn Gotsumon had caused, he doubted that they’d be willing to help him out. Junpei sighed miserably. Despite being hungry, he thought that he could manage another digivolution to look for a place to spend the night. This wasn’t hopeless. He distantly remembered that he’d seen a settlement close to the coast on their way here.
Then, a voice had him jump away from the boulder that he’d been so happily leaning against.
“Damn it, get off of me!”
Hah. The rocky surface shifted into a different shape. JP almost wanted to laugh out loud. The thought of Kouji stumbling through the woods with no idea what he was doing was really funny now that he was face-to-face with Gotsumon. The digimon dropped off the boulder with an air of annoyance surrounding him.
With Kouji gone, JP found that he was also a lot less irritated, and who cared if that Gotsumon had Garmmon? Who knew if Kouji would be any better at controlling it? Now JP felt petty enough to begrudge him the Beast Spirit.
With such cheerful thoughts, it was a lot easier to forgive Gotsumon and JP said lightly, “If you pretend to be a rock you don’t get to complain about being treated as one.” Then, he realized that he’d found a solution to all his problems. “Hey. I want to get back to your village. Do you know the way?”
The digimon narrowed his eyes in suspicion. “You’re not going to lecture me about my Spirit?”
“Nah it’s fine, I don’t care about that anymore,” he said as casually as he could, even though his anger at Kouji still wasn’t sated.
This new attitude didn’t really put Gotsumon at ease. “What changed your mind?”
JP really should have expected that. Oh well. “...I’d rather not talk about it,” he said evasively. Since that didn’t really sound convincing, he decided to add some encouragement, “Besides, you’re right. It’s your life and if you want to throw it away against Cherubimon, then all the power to you.”
“Uh,” Gotsumon said, letting a few moments pass while he processed that. “What did you want again?”
“Which way is your village? You know, the termite hills?” JP repeated.
When Gotsumon started to look around with confusion, JP became really nervous. If this guy didn’t remember the way either because Garmmon had messed with his head, or if he couldn’t figure out a way to make money or to make nice with one of the villages then... then JP would have to spend his night alone outside, in the cold. No, it was even worse. He not only didn’t know the way to the Gotsumon village, he also didn’t know where the Forest Terminal was! Plus, he couldn’t contact Kei and the others! The gravity of the entire situation was threatening to overwhelm him. He was lost in another world and all alone!
But thankfully (depending on your definition of what being thankful meant), two things happened to get him back on track.
Gotsumon said, “Ah, it’s that way,” pointing into a seemingly random direction.
And a heavy thud clued them in to the arrival of a new digimon. It had jumped down from a nearby tree, even if there seemed no logical explanation why it would’ve climbed it in the first place. Especially considering who it turned out to be.
At first, JP had no idea who that was. It was a humanoid digimon roughly the size of Beetlemon that reminded him a bit of a wooden action figure of something that was clearly meant to be a villain. It didn’t have a head per se, just an enormous torso. Its upper part happened to have a flat tower-like cap and in the darkness connecting it to the main torso, two yellow lights shone that represented its eyes. Below the gap was a perfectly round circle with vicious-looking teeth.
It gave them a moment to adjust to its presence and then raised a finger as if to lecture them. “Ding dong! Do not let children handle sharp objects!”
JP blinked, not sure what to do about this recent bout of absolute oddity, and the wooden robot continued, “How peculiar! A human and a Gotsumon meet in my Land of the Forests. The beginning of a beautiful friendship, certainly.”
What. The. Hell? He pinched himself into the arm to see if he’d maybe fallen asleep, but this weird-even-for-digimon-standards guy was still there.
“Who are you?” he asked.
“Are you an idiot?” Gotsumon hissed. “That’s Arbormon! He’s the Warrior of Wood!”
While JP didn’t appreciate being called an idiot, he still snapped to attention. He should have instantly recognised the gear golem from the time Zoe had lent him the Italian book. Another Legendary Warrior! The question was, friend or foe? Maybe another human? In the back of his head, something that Gargoylemon from the library had said was making him very nervous, but he couldn’t really remember...
“He’s one of Cherubimon’s Spirit Warriors!” Gotsumon clarified when JP failed to be appropriately horrified.
Oh, yeah. That was it. Gargoylemon had told him that Cherubimon controlled the other five elements and that it would be only logical to meet them on the battlefield. But how did Gotsumon know that? From what JP knew of the others of his kind, they weren’t really big on travelling or informed about the world.
He shifted uncomfortably. He really didn’t want to fight again today… And the thought occurred to him that neither he nor Gotsumon looked all that suspicious. Maybe Arbormon would just leave them alone if they didn’t provoke him?
“Someone has been doing his homework,” Arbormon said good-naturedly. He rolled his shoulders, gears clicking, and continued, “You left quite the trail of destruction behind yourselves. You’re clearly unfit for the Beast of Light. The great Cherubimon will safeguard it.”
Oh great! Arbormon just had to have investigated that damn village full of birds and these grey dogs! He came here to find the one who caused all this destruction. Huh, that meant he didn’t know about Beetlemon.
Arbormon stretched out a hand. “So give me Garmmon, alright?”
Gotsumon, visibly shaken by the sudden appearance of an enemy, rallied valiantly. Nobody would threaten ‘his’ Beast Spirit. “You’re crazy if you think that’ll work!”
Already, the worrisome glow of Garmmon appeared in his yellow eyes, slowly turning them into liquid light.
“If it’s a fight you seek, I shall be happy to provide!” Arbormon said, sounding genuinely excited.
Well, even with control issues, Garmmon was a damn stronger fighter. JP was ready to let Gotsumon handle this one—
Arbormon Slide Digivolve to... Petaldramon!
JP had seen Blizzarmon. He’d seen how tall and frightening that thing had been.
It was nothing compared to the behemoth that was Petaldramon: an absolutely massive lizard-like creature that towered over them. He easily cleared the height of a single-family house while walking on four tree trunk-thick legs. Moss grew all over his body and the ends of his split tail looked like tree roots that could give a mammoth tree in the human world a run for their money.
Petaldramon’s face was covered in bark and a wreath of dark red leaves surrounded it like a mane. (Looks a little like chestnut. Hm, maybe oak? the studious part of JPs brain mused, before the rest of it jerked it back to the present) Their function wasn’t only decorative. They started rotating around his face and Petaldramon sent out a petal storm through his nostrils.
“Leaf Cyclone!”
JP’s distance to the massive Beast of Wood saved them. He jumped forward and pushed Gotsumon out of the way while the attack rushed past them and pulverized the boulder. JP stared at the destruction and hurried to draw his D-Tector. Next to him, light surrounded Gotsumon that turned into fractal code.
While JP summoned the data ring around his hand, he had a comforting thought: the second a threat appeared on the horizon, he could always scrape together the energy for another transformation.
That had to be the reason why Gotsumon managed to summon the data cocoon, despite his utter exhaustion. It almost looked like Garmmon took over just because it wanted to fight.
Execute Spirit Digivolve to... Beetlemon!
Gotsumon Beast Spirit Digivolve to ... (AHHH!) ... GARMMON!
And Garmmon’s first step after freeing itself from the fractal code was to fire a frickin’ laser beam at Beetlemon.
His world became light.
-Kouji-
Kouji had considered digivolving after getting rid of Junpei. But with Garmmon inactive, it was impossible to feel the faint pull of the Beast Spirit. The lull in results left him ample time to ponder if the Spirit really was worth it.
He wasn’t worried about the loss of control. Just, this whole side venture was taking up valuable time and he was still anxious about taking too long to reach the Forest Terminal. The only reason he hadn’t given up on the search yet was because the woman had told him where to find the Beast Spirit. She had also guided him to Lobomon. It seemed like whatever was at the Forest Terminal relied on him having both Spirits.
Despite these clear worries, there was somehow room in his mind to be frustrated about something else.
Kouji rammed a fist against the bark of the tree that he was just passing.
To think Junpei hadn’t even realized what he’d said. How could anyone be that ignorant? He breathed out through his nose in an effort to calm down. It didn’t matter. He could stop caring about Junpei or the others now.
Kouji came to a decision and stood up straight again. He would find another village and ask for directions to the Forest Terminal. Garmmon was still close by, that much he could feel, and he had a greater chance of finding Gotsumon in a village than in a random patch of forest.
(Kouji was too far away and his connection to Garmmon still too weak to pick up on the fight occurring elsewhere in this forest.)
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1. What's your initial reaction to the chapter?
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2. What were your favourite parts and why?
3. What were your least favourite parts and why?
4. Are there any characters you especially liked in this chapter?
5. Or some you especially didn't like?
6. Did anything in this chapter surprise you?
7. How do you feel about the fact that Spirit Digivolution has such a long time limit (multiple hours)? And the fact that the kids are forced out of the transformation once that limit is reached?
8. Do you think the argument between Kouji and JP was believable? Who’s in the right?
9. What’s your opinion...
a. ...on the group/group dynamic?
b. ...on Kouji?
c. ...on JP?
d. ...on Gotsumon?
e. ...on Arbormon?
10. In case someone doesn’t read the chapter title, do you think I need to make it clearer that this takes place before the events of last chapter?
11. Were any parts confusing, unconvincing or unclear?
12. On a scale of 1 to 10, how much did you enjoy that chapter?
13. On a scale of 1 to 10 how eager are you to read the next chapter?
14. Do you have any predictions?
Hey Tikaa, Alex is back! Lately I've been feeling like I pour too much energy in the reactions to answer the questions that well. So for this one, I'll be focusing more on the questions, only reacting to the most significant scenes. Now, onward I go~
Impeccable delivery! It's straight up cold, perfect portrayal of Kouji's character. It sets up the scene where Kouji is trying to be better by actually caring about those who help him. In a way, that feels rewarding as a reader. But you snatch it all away by mentioning that he regrets his decision. A snake doesn't shed its skin that easy, huh?
I guess this some consolation at least, that he had a logical reason behind his frustration. It doesn't excuse his attitude, but with Kouji, I've learnt to keep my expectations low.
I get his perspective. But there's also the fact that he's the strongest fighter out of all of them. It feels like everyone continues to overlook his better qualities for his human flaws, though they'd be having a hell lot of a harder time without him. All this contributing towards the group clearly can't do a thing, untill people begin to genuinely appreciate him. That'd be filling arc to explore..
Okay, this was a little harsh! I'm kinda sick of his insufferable attitude, especially since I was sensing more of a redemption arc after he returned on the Trailmon in an interlude. Character justification is good but it gets repetitive and boring with time. I really hope this is going somewhere. JP really went out of his way to go after Kouji, I think act humble for a minute. Also to leave him when he came specifically for him, given would be alone with no help as a consequence, and when he never wanted to come in the first place- is low, even for someone with an icy heart like Kouji.
This juxtaposition was sad yet chilling. Bringing back Tommy's trauma was like scratching at an old wound, and relating it to Gotsumon manipulates sympathy onto the outsider. Quite the literary masterstroke, I'll admit. It also goes to show how much unconditional support can change one's course of life- something I relate to myself quite well.
I've always thought there's a price to every decision one makes. But in something as materialistic as a Digimon transformation, the cost is much more literal. But I like to think of it as a metaphor for the more emotional turmoil involved, very rewarding to read for sure!
This gave me quite a cackle. This Gotsumon is.. interesting, to say the least. I don't necessarily blame his thought process given his limited exposure in life, but he's responsible for not heeding the advice of our heroes. I'm willing to lend him some time, but he's gonna become a lot problematic if he doesn't listen. Also, if things are this dire, why hasn't Kouji called Garrmon to himself? Perhaps he's looking for a way to control it first, but seems like a wild goose chase to me.
The struggles of the 'chosen one trope' always thrill me. Like yes they're special, but go through a lot to fulfill their destiny. It's unfathomable for real world, I'd not survive a day in their shoes. It seems fair for them to try to preserve that sense of entitlement, if only as compensation for the dangers they put themselves through. Plus I'm not against people seizing power, unless they know how to use it and have no I'll intentions.
At the same time, I get this perspective quite well too. Ugh, being empathetic is such a curse. For someone, a spirit could mean the world. Someone who doesn't know our heroes too well could quite easily classify them as spirit hoarders, even though that'd be a big misjudgement. Gotsumon has put life and sweat behind this spirit, and endured a lot from the village men because of it. I can't blame him for holding on to it, especially when the heroes can't really justify their claim in a solid way. I'd even argue he deserves it more than Kouji, but certainly needs to acknowledge the responsibility behind it and agree to work collaboratively to save the world.
THIS. Kouji doesn't try, he just does enough that it looks like he's trying. He also doesn't have much of a choice if he's to survive in a treacherous world such as this. I doubt he'd choose to even meet any one after all of this is over. I see things are reaching their breaking point, or the writing wouldn't have been so direct. Hopefully we get a rewarding close to the matter.
I'd be very honest here- I don't think JP would've gone after Kouji if Zoe hadn't asked him to. The politics within the group is insane (slightly uncomfortable as I relate to it in an unhealthy amount)! I do think Zoe is jumping the boundaries here, but it's her privilege to use. She did earn it afterall, supporting him at times when no one else did. But I do sense she's milking her position- as this now allows her to continue to exploit Tommy in caring for Tommy and dealing with difficult situations, with not many points being deducted from her anymore. Given how bad his terms are with everyone, neutrality with Zoe is like water in a desert. Alas for him, Zoe doesn't seem the most genuine person to trust, but not like he has a choice to begin with.
Clever, I LOVED this! Putting yourself in someone else's thought process and it working wonders is a familiar concept to me, but it never gets too old to stop liking. The point is rightly made too, doubling the blow! It's good to see JP stepping out his usual nags to land and impact, I couldn't be more proud!
It pains me to see JP try so hard and get so little in return. Someday, they'll see him for all that he does. Hopefully my heart is not too numb for him till then. Plus he really tried, he doesn't really owe Zoe any more than that.
Guess Kouji has his perks afterall.. Honestly speaking, he would've replaced JP as my favourite if not for his unstoppable superiority complex. It's nice to see JP's mind is eased though, my poor guy always worrying for everyone. Jumping to the worst possibility shows how much he really cares, and that's nothing to be embarassed about. They don't deserve this side of him, in the slightest. Wish I could just give him a hug <3
Kei do be like that! When I think about it, the girls are a lot better at communication than the guys. A universal occurence, I'm inclined to assume. They have their issues, but know how to get work out of someone. And if that isn't the most useful skill in the world. I wish I had that power :/
Because you'd be in a hella worse state dealing with Garrmon without him around. Act your age, Kouji, people can be as rude as you, they're just choosing to let you off easy. An umbrella becomes a burden when it's not raining, I just thought you knew better than that.
Now now JP, we don't stoop to their level. Please don't make me hate you, even though Kouji has done more than enough to deserve this.
Onto the questions I go-
1. What's your initial reaction to the chapter?
It was quite frustrating, if I'm to speak freely here XD. Kouji and JP don't really get along, and that's no secret. Having a chapter solely with them, out of all our heroes, certainly turned up the heat a little. But I'd say you need it every once in a while, to keep the tension in check. Their differences clashed in a way way that would've never happened in the girls' watch. I do see that JP wasn't perfect this chapter, but his slipups are nothing compared to Kouji's behaviour. Their conversation with Gotsumon was also most fascinating, and offered us a fresh side plot in the otherwise predictable story. It raises valid points, even if a unidirectional tradition. A bump in the road, but it'd be exciting to see how you get the Spirit from him. It needs to be willing for it feels rewarding, but treachery would certainly spice up things!
2. What were your favourite parts and why?
The conversation with Gotsumon was most enlightening. Not in the sense that I had been waiting for it, but because it expanded my horizons a lot more than I thought possible. I've referred to our protagonists as 'heroes' so many times now that I forgot to question it. The assumption must be so foreign to an outsider, almost like a scam. I don't necessarily like Gotsumon, but am a big fan of what he represents- a common man, unaware of all this superpower propaganda. He's annoying, but real. Life certainly hasn't been easy for him, which makes sympathizing to him rather easy. He believed in the existence of the spirit, and was laughed at and pushed away because of it. In the end, he was right. He worked to find the spirit, whatever resources he could get his hands at, and got what he so wanted. It can made to sound a motivational story so effortlessly. Likewise, our heroes could be framed the villains. A different perspective is difficult to swallow, but incredibly refreshing once you move past your bias.
I liked the heated argument when JP leaves at the end. He said some inexcusable things, but it's not like he was the first one to do that. Sometimes you gotta return the fire and I can respect that. I feel like he's been had that thought for a while now, from the night in the inn. He can be nagging, but he means no ill. Kouji was also pushing his fate all day, so karma was sweet to witness. Him moving towards the Forest Terminal alone is kinda bittersweet. He's doing what he wanted for so long, thus I'm happy for him. But he goes alone, bit by fate and the hell of his own actions. Maybe he'll cross paths with the girls and Tommy though. I'm most excited to see what awaits him!
3. What were your least favourite parts and why?
The Arbormom appearance, perhaps because I was still holding out hope for him to join the good side? His loyalties were grey till then and there's still a chance for him to switch sides, but this chapter sealed his team for now. With no external influence whatsoever, him trying to take Garrmon seemed reflective of his own intentions. His immense power was a treat though, since Grumblemon was looking down to him a little in the last chapter. If he's got to be a villian, I'd want him to be stronger than Grumblemon in that. It also felt off that such a powerful Beast Digimon won't sense Bettlemon's presence, even if JP didn't digivolve. Shouldn't all their powers and experience help with that? Bettlemon getting down in a single blow from Garrmon was also not my most favourite part to read as a very biased reader. Such cliffhangers kinda make fidgety, so you succeed if that was the goal.
4. Are there any characters you especially liked in this chapter?
Gotsumon, because of the variety and new opinions he offered. His outlook is most natural, even if not quite fitting for a heroic world. It's selfish, but not much different than how a person next door would've reacted to the entire situation.
JP because he was fairly good (and if course, because he's my favourite). The guy chased down Lobomon just because Zoe asked him to, and stayed with him even when the younger guy kept trying to push him away. Like how many people is JP supposed to babysit? Putting your own self respect aside for the other's well being takes a good conscience- something Junpei displayed. Meditating the conversations with Gotsumon was also something that should be appreciated, especially since Kouji wasn't responding all that logically because of his own attachment. He even cared about Zoe with all the distance between them- he's really the mother of the group. Even when he leaves in the end, he was within his right to. I'm also slightly glad that he took a stand for himself like that.
5. Or some you especially didn't like?
Kouji- does that even come as a surprise? At this point, I've begun to expect it. It's so ironic that everyone says JP as the nagging one, since his attitude never rests and even Kei can be so annoying at times. It's one thing to not want to work in a group, but one thing to sabotage it. The fact that he actually goes ahead with it, knowing well that the need for staying united very much remains, is so foolish for a character like him. How does he plan to survive alone when a Beast Digimon attacks him. The ignorance is insane, since he has witnessed it firsthand with his first digivolution. He should know better than believing he can handle being outnumbered or overpowered. It's not like he's got much of an advantageous element too, it's pretty neutral when it comes to most of the battles. He really needs to be brought down a notch, I just don't think gentle would do it now. He's been so problematic since the beginning, to think I was contemplating making him my favourite!
6. Did anything in this chapter surprise you?
Wasn't expecting Arbormon to show up when he did, certainly. His introduction last chapter was pretty convenient now that I think about it, but you didn't let a single other clue slide about how soon it'd be coming, You did set it up, but didn't spoil- a writer's win, I'm assuming.
Junpei leaving Kouji was satisfying, I just didn't think the story would go on to be rather this anti climatic just yet. But then again, enough was said and done to cause it. JP finding Gotsumon in the end was a nice twist, but I kinda saw that coming with how you phrased the 'familiar rock'. I don't think you wanted to hide it, must've been an Easter egg and I was lucky enough to find it! =)
7. How do you feel about the fact that Spirit Digivolution has such a long time limit (multiple hours)? And the fact that the kids are forced out of the transformation once that limit is reached?
Both very plausible! Trust me, fantasy writers get away with a lot worse. I love how reasonable you try to keep everything, but you don't gotta worry this much. If you wished to ease your mind though, you could make the transformation time slightly variable. It could depend on the individual's stamina (maybe JP has the least, and Kei the longest since she was in basketball and thus ought to be fit? Zoe could have a decent limit, more on the longer side since she's a fast runner. Tommy would be a little on the lower end, but mostly because of his still young age.), mental state (less when you're sad, more when you're panicking or feeling heroic) and need (sometimes the body adapts to the situation, you could make it apply to spirit Digimon). The time limit could grow and develop with experience and as our heroes get more tune with our spirits. They could be different for human and beast, too. You could take it either way and explain accordingly. For example- beast transformation last longer since they're stronger, or last shorter since they're more draining. Maybe element and power variations too? Bettlemon is the strongest so cannot keep it up all that long. Kazemon has the weakest attacks, so could stay transformed for much longer. Putting all these out there for thoughts!
8. Do you think the argument between Kouji and JP was believable? Who’s in the right?
Very much so, it's even been brewing for a while. If Kouji hadn't been so insufferable, I would've abandoned JP's side for the last comment he made. But since Kouji got what he wanted anyways and JP was the one who was left in danger because of him, I don't feel much pity for him. JP is clearly in the right, and I think anyone would see that. My fav guy has his flaws, but contained them well this chapter, all to look out for the other guy. Kouji, however, barely stretched the same favor. He always starts things, and expects to get away with it. I admit that JP may have been a little out of line in the night at the inn, but things were much more unidirectional this time.
9. What’s your opinion...
a. ...on the group/group dynamic?
There were just the guys in this one (I don't forget you Tommy, you're just too sweet for discussions such as these), so not much to speculate. But I'll say this- an friendship doesn't work from one side alone. JP tried his best to make something work, but it's not his fault if the other party burns the bridges. There is no group, when it's just them two. More of a unilateral decision, but I guess you gotta deal with the cards you're dealt with.
b. ...on Kouji?
He really needs to work on himself. I'm surprised I'm saying this after so much as went down. I thought everyone would be more mature by now, and most of the protagonists are. So ironic that the character who started out so wise is now refusing to see the most plain logic. Do better Kouji, if not for anyone else, then for the sake of your own survival. A bundle is harder to break than a single stick- don't you forget that.
c. ...on JP?
He's trying, I can see that. He deserves a pat on the back on how far he's come, without losing his heart of gold. But I wish he'd bite his tounge when he's already winning. I overlook his slight commentary, but it gives material to the readers not so partial to him. But he's well within the boundaries for his flawed commentary, just hoping he doesn't overstep them. I get his horrible standing in the group, and don't see much of a way out. But he could start by saying no when he doesn't want to do something, perhaps something as simple as going after Kouji when Zoe asked him to. Because when he finally goes the other way, it's his own life that ends up endangered. That, in fact, does end up happening as he loses consciousness to Gotusmon's attack. With Arbormon right on his head, who's to tell he won't lose his spirit now. Zoe can chase down Kouji herself the next time if she so desires, JP needs to realise he's not her puppy. These are life stakes we're talking about!
d. ...on Gotsumon?
Loved his complexity, and his overlap with a common outside presence. He calls out the bullshit he sees, and doesn't belittle his struggles in the face of threats. Despite being partial to the heroes, his story won over me. You've certainly gone out of your way developing me, wouldn't have been easy stepping out the mould for your traditional characters or at least spirit bearers!
e. ...on Arbormon?
Think I've said on the matter already. But I'll add that I hope he gets the deserved attention, for it has lots of potential for a development.
10. In case someone doesn’t read the chapter title, do you think I need to make it clearer that this takes place before the events of last chapter?
I think it's deducible if one tries hard enough, but some added easy clarification never hurts!
11. Were any parts confusing, unconvincing or unclear?
Grumblemon's disappearance was left a little explained. How did he escape Garrmon's chase and why did the Light Beast Digimon continue to run in such a definite direction even after his object of pursuing had vanished? It made no sense to me. I get that Grumblemon can disappear through ground, but Garrmon's lack of reaction felt hollow. Even the boys don't mention it at all, which exaggerated my assumption of this being a plot hole. It's not the what that's the problem, but the lack of why that's slightly off putting. Make the characters discuss it (as Zoe expressed her surprise in the previous chapter) and you'll make it a plot in progress instead.
12. On a scale of 1 to 10, how much did you enjoy that chapter?
8.5, the arguments got a little repetitive but loved the Gotsumon's side of the story.
13. On a scale of 1 to 10 how eager are you to read the next chapter?
9, shall we finally reach the Forest Terminal? :side eyes:
14. Do you have any predictions?
I think we'll take a side course with Bettlemon and Ardormon first. For all I know, Gotsumon will disappear from the field. Ardormon, after a long venting conversation, spares JP of his spirit and guides him to the Forest Terminal where the other heroes are headed.
And I'm done. That's all for now, Tikaa. Might need some time before I get back to WoS (until mid Sept I think). But this was great, like always. You never disappoint, I shouldn't be surprised! Keep writing, until next time ~
Love, Alex