Sorry to bother you, but... I'm... I need... I just need this review for the checklist challenge, I was just looking through some old stuff and-- I'm sure you understand-- please don't kill me.
What I Liked
I feel like the first verse was my favorite, followed by Verses 2, 3, and 4. No, that was not on purpose.
What I Disliked
Unlike the other verses, Verse 4 doesn't have a pair of rhyming lines, and that throws it off. I' also not fond of repeated choruses, but then again, you might be singing it in your head a lot better than I am.
In Summary
A good set of lyrics, but there's still room for improvement.
Have a nice [*insert time of day here*]!!!
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