Young Writers Society

Death is something that many seek, but it strikes fast and cruelly. Unexpectedly.

This poem addresses the issue of death at will. It gives a pained expression that many see, but don't understand.

The cause of this worldview is a dark one. The lack of faith in life.
Life is a cruel beast, hunting and hurting, merciless and unforgiving, but once you tame it, it is a powerful ally, giving you wealth and power.

All people go through the pain. The only difference is how you handle it.

There are two types of people. This poem shows one clearly. Those who die.
And the other...

Those who live.

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You really put a lot of effort into this! And none of that effort was anywhere near wasted! I really love it- especially the personification and symbolism. It's conveyed so well in the short, digestible poem. I read it so many times, and it never got old!
I love that the poem starts out with a kind of happy opening line of "I'm in love with death." Just alone, the line could be interpreted in so many different ways, but the poem develops this idea so well! I really hope you didn't have to (and will never have to) go through something like this; no one deserves to.
I love this poem!