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I can actually relate to this type of thing and maybe that's why I was so deeply affected by your words. I liked how you used "imaginary umbrella" which symbolizes moral support or "imaginary" meaning false support. Either way I can it's beautifully written. I can just hear the word pour off of the page fluently.
I did rather enjoy reading this.
Although I understand that it was a 'casual poem' as you described it 'to let out frustration' I think it was incredibly well written and contained good vocabulary.
I believe that writing poetry/stories is a great way to convey your own emotions and to let out all of the emotions that are inside of you. I myself have often used this technique.
Keep on writing.
Well done!
Thanks! ^^