BRITISH ISLES
BELAVRUV, MANNINGTON
HOUNDSWORTH ESTATE
1920
James felt his cap fall off his head and faintly heard it poof to the ground. He let it lie there. Too busy taking in every detail of the large extravagant room to be bothered it pick it up. They’d visited plenty of extravagant buildings in their line of work, trashed more than one. A few too many casualties in the form of ornate China vases. They never had the time to really admire them. A high ceiling, wood beams, ornate rugs covering almost every floor. It all was so real and warm.
Of course, it was real.
Almost terrifyingly so, with the task at hand. If they were meeting the royal family, they’d be walking into the lion's den, so to speak. He frowned and glanced at the stairs again. Or maybe they were the lions.
Footsteps padded at the top of the stairs, and a maid appeared. She smiled when she spotted him, and he took that as a sign to step towards the stairs.
“Mr. Rodsworth, I presume?” The maid leaned over the railing. He didn’t recognize her from the maids who’d greeted the upon arrival.
“The one and only.” James reached to take his hat off, groping nothing but air.
The maid laughed. “If you’re looking for your hat, it's on the ground.”
Of course. James turned and swooped to pick it up in one smooth motion, giving a dramatic bow with the hat as he faced the maid again.
“Come on up then, the lady awaits.” The maid disappeared from the railing.
Setting his hat firmly on his head, he walked up the stairs as fast as he could without sending echoes of his steps throughout the halls. “I’m Ana by the way.”
“Nice to meet you Ana.” He said as they met Verena standing in the middle of the hall, staring out a window.
She’d had a nearly complete transformation since he’d seen her a few minutes ago. Dressed now in an elegant cream dress overlaid with white lace, her hair done up in coils around her head, with pearls on her ears and a long strand draped from her neck. She fiddled with the end of it absentmindedly. Dropping it as soon as she saw them.
James adjusted the lapels of his jacket. Feeling sorely underdressed. At least this was his first time wearing the neatly pressed uniform, and the tour of the yard hadn’t landed him in any puddles.
Verena greeted him with a quick up and down of her eyes, marking him presentable, then turned and followed the maid to lead them down a hall. Once she was far enough ahead, Verena slowed, allowing James to catch up.
James caught her eye, and she tilted her head, lifting a finger to her lips before she blinked slowly, like a dash in Morse code. Observe, don’t speak unless spoken to.
The maid slowed her steps as they neared the door that ended the hall. With no other sound to mask it, Verena and James' collective inhale seemed to fill the room.
James nodded and took a slight pause in his steps, allowing the distance to grow between them again.
The maid knocked at the door, hand on the handle as she listened for a reply. She turned to them. “Ready?”
“Yes. Thank you, Ana.” Verena smiled.
James catalogued the maid's name in his head, pairing it with the picture of her green eyes, as the trio entered the room. Ana gave some introduction, but he dulled it out as he dipped his hat off his head, pressing it to his chest in a bow, and took in the scene before him. Right now, his senses were better put to absorbing all new information.
When he looked up, he thought they’d entered a painting.
A woman sat on a stiff-looking couch, perpendicular to the door. Ringlet curls framed a smiling face, cheeks full and eyes bright. Her pale pink dress, with the skirt draped over the couch. Like a more regal version of Verena’s yet decorated with just as much lace.
Beside her stood a tall, dark man, adorned in a pressed blue suit with what looked like some sort of military ribbons and medals pinned to the lapels. Standing beside him was a young man, not much further off their age, James guessed. His ambiance brighter, like the woman’s, with sunshine curls framing his head like a crown. He also wore a suit like the man beside him, if less decorated, but not lacking its stature. Someone of nearly equal rank, then?
As James rolled back his shoulders, drawing himself straighter, Ana left the room, and they were left alone, facing the royals.
Verena spoke first. “It’s a pleasure to make your acquaintance, Your Majesties. I look forward to serving you. I am honoured to have this opportunity.” She looked at the woman.
The Queen. Queen… James searched for their names in his mind.
King Aldrick and Queen Cordelia, reigning monarchs of Belacruv. Blond-haired Cordelia, dark-haired Aldrick. He added the names to this mental list, alongside Anas.
James’ gaze went from the tall man, the king, to the young man. Was he some sort of vassal? Rather young for one, but if he were here… rather casually with the way he stood next to the king. A prince? Was he, the prince? How many princes were there? Had the files mentioned more than one son? With the short time he’d had to become familiar with the case files, the information hadn’t had time to stick.
He paused his line of thoughts before the silence drew on too long and smiled. “I also look forward to serving Your Majesties with any, uh, transportation needs.”
That sounded lacking. He bit his tongue.
While the conversation shifted back to Verena, James’s mind wandered.
What was his role in this household? What was it, really? He was a chauffeur, but he had to be one of the first. Cars had only been around, what, a decade now? How much did they need him here? This meeting felt more like a formality, the “way things were done” than a need of staff. Of course they’d want to be introduced to the staff serving them, but at the end of the day he was Verena’s accessory.
The wealthy, in his experience, could afford to keep the little things that they needed rarely, if only for appearances. He could be an ornament, an observant ornament for a little while. At least it freed up time to snoop around. He should seek out some of those secret passages Verena had mentioned.
The king turned and smiled at him.” I’m afraid we won't be using you much. Cordelia’s not a fan of driving. Really, it's just I who uses the car from time to time. I’m sure Lavenia will be more comfortable having a friend from home. I understand that you two grew up together?”
James smiled, grappling with both statements, not sure which one to acknowledge first.
The King continued. “I only mean that I prefer to drive myself and Her Majesty when we go out, and Benedict here is more partial to horses.” The king mistook his pause for confusion. Benedict smiled, proper as a mouse.
Benedict. The name rung a bell. He was one son. Had there been another named? This one certainly didn’t seem like a threat, standing there all cheery and polite. Posh British probably ran in his veins instead of blood. But looks could be deceiving, especially in this line of work. He took a measured, quiet breath. Searching for information in his head that didn’t seem to exist.
He directed his thoughts back to people in front of him. “Yes, Your Majesty. I had the privilege of knowing her ladyship from a young age.”
“I cannot recommend a better driver if you ever wish to learn, Your Highness.” Verena took the moment to address the prince herself. James watched him, ears and eyes open for any signs nominating him as the one. Any small mention or indication that they’d set him as the heir.
The prince chuckled. “I’d like to hang onto my days as a man only versed in the ways of the horse for as long as I can. But I shall keep that in mind.”
“You know where to find me, Your Majesty,” James answered.
The Queen stood, skirts rustling. “Well, I suppose we shan’t keep you for much longer. We’ve already kept you waiting with such a late welcome. I do apologies for that.” She twisted her hands together. “Something important came up. Besides, you and I are wanted elsewhere.” The Queen reached a hand toward Verena. “If you’ll follow me, Lavinia, the ladies have been waiting in the study. We’ll leave the men to talk about whether beast or machine is better.”
The king chuckled at the comment, who gave his wife a kiss on the cheek as she swept by him. As Verena stepped in front of James as she went towards the queen. Moving her arms behind her, as if to clasp her hands behind her back. Instead, she clasped one hand into a beak, then made a fist, pointing her thumb down. Talk, tonight.
The women swept out of the room in a colourful tangle of skirts, leaving through the hall they’d come in, the tail end of their conversation carrying down the hall.
“Could you remind me of your other ladies-in-waiting? How long have they been in your service, Your majesty.” Verena said.
“Oh, of course, and please, Lavinia, call me Cordelia.” The Queens voice faded.
James shifted from one foot to the other. One on one conversation with a king and a prince about cars. That was a new one.
“Well, there’s no reason for us to keep you either. You're free to go, Mr. Rodwick. If there're any issues with the automobiles, do let the butler know. We intend to keep them in proper shape, even if we don’t use them much. We’ll have to debate some other time.” He winked and turned to his son.
James dipped in another half-bow. It was like being a door hinge, the way he bent stiffly from his waist. Then swiftly took a long backward step out of the room, hurrying down the hall once he was sure he was out of earshot.
At least he’d met them. Now he could place some faces to the name. He just needed to find out- wait. He froze. Verena had said her room was up here. He took a glance at all the doors he passed. Every single one was identical.
What was it she had said, tenth door down? Moving once again to the stairs, he turned, counting the doors rapidly as he went.
One, three, five, seven, nine. He stopped, and ten.
James studied the door. That was it, then. He briefly considered entering. No shadows moved under the door, and no footsteps sounded inside, but he didn’t want to chance running into Ana right now.
He turned. Better to get out of the hall before someone caught him. As entertaining as it would be, the rumours that would spiral if he were caught snooping around Verena's room would not be beneficial to the mission. Amusing, sure, but not beneficial.
Now, secret passages. That door the butler had come out of when they’d arrived must be connected to the staff quarters, which should connect to at least some of the secret passages. He stepped down into the entryway, taking a slow, long look at the four wood-panelled walls that surrounded him. There could be something there. He turned back to the stairs. They floated off the floor, supported by beams set into the wall. He pressed a hand into the panel under the lowest stair. Nothing. He continued onto the next. One side tilted inward, hinging like a door. Interesting. He moved to the edge and pushed harder. The panel swung open. Revealing an oil lamp lit stairwell. Spooky.
Defiantly went somewhere. The staff quarters were on the other side of the building, so either it didn't lead there, or it was a maze of underground halls. Better start from the staff quarters and find his way back.
As he entered the yard once again, the sun was lowering in the sky, sending golden rays and long shadows across the grass. At least the sun remained the same. It was what, just over a hundred years younger now?
Allowing himself a moment to breathe in the fresh air, the clang of a bell. Echoing through the yard. He frowned. What could that signify?
He twisted his wrist around to check his watch. Cleverly disguised from its black glass screen to an intricately made copper-coloured analog watch. It’s two hands pointing squarely to eight thirty o’clock.
He squinted at the numbers. Now, why did eight thirty deserve a bell ring? Was brain fog a side effect of time travelling? Should he write this down? No, he couldn’t write anything down. People could find written notes. But you could also burn written notes. But nobody could hack your brain. Not that he could even remember the mission files. Then again, he did have his mission files hidden away in the cottage. Paper files. He should check on those.
James chuckled, although surely brain hacking wasn’t far off, given he was standing in the middle of a living, breathing, castle in the nineteen hundreds. It would be useful if someone else could dig out the meaning of eight thirty from his brain.
“Chadwick!” A feminine voice called him. He blinked, shaken from his thoughts. Ana stood across the grass, waving him over. “Come on, you’ll be late for dinner!”
Dinners at eight thirty. The housekeeps voice repeated in his head. He sprinted after Ana as her figure vanished around the corner into the servants' yard.
Of course, dinner! How could he forget?
He filed in behind Ana, as a sea of black and white uniforms gathered in the halls, some talking excitedly, others trudging forward as they made their way into the dining room.
Aromas filled the air, thick with the day's cooking. Sweet carrots, potatoes and the scent of fresh bread from the morning still seemed to linger. Beyond that, he couldn’t tell what else was cooking.
Chairs were pulled out and people settled in, echoes of the scrape of wood on wood filling the space. Until the room slowly settled into the silence of anticipation. James pulled his hat off his head, tucking it under his chair, praying he wouldn’t forget it.
Everyone else was quietly pulling napkins onto their laps, James followed suit as a stout woman entered, bearing a steaming platter. As she set it down, she addressed one footman sitting beside James.
“Mason, yer sweetheart wants a hand in the kitchen.”
“Aye, does she now, Miss Selah?” Mr. Thomas smiled and swiftly left the table as a collective giggle went round.
“Mr. Thomas, or Mason and Constance, are married, the two lovely fools.” Ana whispered across the table to him.
The couple drifted back into the room, Constance carrying a gravy boat and Mason a platter of roast.
“Aw, would ya hurry up. My stomach's so empty, it’s echoing.” The gripe spoken by one of the footmen, bushy-haired and blue eyed was quickly silenced by a plausible glare from the butler. Who then folded his hands to speak a prayer so well said, James wondered if he even registered the words that came out of his mouth.
In-between bites of food and polite inquires into his life, and by effect the “Lady Parker's life,” he took advantage of the comfortable atmosphere the staff fell into, to eavesdrop.
Most of it was chatter surrounding the events in the castle, the maids and the Queens Handmaid, Miss Linnet, and the seamstresses were engrossed in talk of dresses, an up-and-coming gala, held by a duke who it seems the queen didn’t hold in high regard.
The footmen interjected here and there with their own bits. Leaving James with a general picture in his head of the castle gossip. Like piecing together a puzzle of pieces gained from the respective male and female sides of the noble houses.
His ears perked up when Julian, a bespeckled and spectacled young man with brown curls, was asked a question by the butler regarding the “archives in the library.”
Julian had set his fork down and leaned towards the butler. “Yes, what is it?”
‘I was wondering if you could spare a list of some of the newer nobles. Their majesties were wondering about it. With the gala coming up and some of the more recent marriages.” The butler said.
“I can bring one up in the morning. You needn’t visit yourself. I know you're busy with the gala coming up.”
“Yes. Fantastic. Thank you.” Julian Said.
The archives? That sounded like a useful hub of information. If they kept records of the nobles, they must have the birth records of the royal family, possibly even a family tree, and more importantly, the heir to the throne.
James tilted his head, catching Mason's attention. “What's the archives?”
Mason waved at Julian. “Records and such. Ask the Keeper himself.”
Julian eyed James lazily, inquired by the mention of his name. He took a slow bite of food as he studied the new chauffeur.
James ignored the slight disdain and played the ignorantly curious card. “Archives, eh? That sounds interesting. Where is it?”
“The library.”
“Which is?”
“The short, round tower.”
So that’s what that was. “Can I visit?”
“Why?”
“Curiosity.”
“The library, yes. The archives are a question for another time.” Julian pushed his chair away from the table. “If you’ll please excuse me, Miss Selah. Excellent meal, as always. Mr. Daran.” He gave a curt nod to the butler and the cook.
James watched him leave. That one, he wanted to keep an eye one. Something simmered under the surface there, and he wanted to know what was in the archives that motivated such a curt excuse. James considered excusing himself to trail the man, but he doubted Julian was going to do anything that important this evening. He could visit the library n the morning. Right now, he wanted to hear more about these gala whisperings that were going around.
As the rest of the staff finished their plates and started trickling away back to attend to the family upstairs, James sided up to the butler. “I keep hearing talk of a gala, where is it being held?”
Seeing Mr. Daran’s confusion to the abrupt question, he added. “Will the cars or more importantly, myself, be needed?”
“Ah,” the butler said. “No, no, they will not. It's being held in the grand rooms here. You needn’t worry about that.” They strode past the stairs, and the butler took the opportunity to disappear up them with a politely muttered excuse.
That was a dead end. However, Verena would likely be attending, so maybe it was time for a late-night visit.
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That is still the king talking, all the time right? I’m also confused about Benedict here… since well. Ok it is late for me and maybe I just can’t parse royal speak at 1:30 am. Doesn’t change that “ the now named” sounds v awkward XD…also maybe you should check the folder because I clicked on “Next” in Ch6 and it took me to Ch5. I know 5 is the best number but I want Ch7! (Can you tell that this is 1am time for me?)
Well, would the royal family really be the lion’s den? It’s not like they know Verena and James came here to murk one of them… Makes way more sense when James calls themselves the lions =D
Love how James tries to tip his hat to the maid XDD and the easy charisma with which he covers that blunder!
Interesting that Verena checks his appearance again—when she admitted in her own section that she has no clue what presentable even means to these ppl =D
Hmm I figured with how well they work together that maybe they have a code language. A sign language or something, so Verena doesn’t have to whisper something like “I talk you observe” which… I feel is a task distribution v familiar for this duo =D
(Tho I can also imagine Verena indeed coming up with a few quick and subtle hand signs for common occasions and James always fumbling them until she gave up lol)
Uhh why is James asking what he is supposed to do “then”? Does he mean after he is done observing? I thought “you observe” is an easy, ongoing task???
Why didn’t James catch the introduction Ana gave for him and Verena? I don’t understand that part. Is he too far away? Because… looking and listening require two different sets of senses so….
I like how James describes the royals like a painting. They probably practiced a lot to pull this off =D
Ohh I like the sudden analytic streak James displays, when he thinks abt his role in the household. It works v well for him! And I agree: rich ppl flaunting their wealth by keeping a chauffeur on hand is very on brand. Also that they gave him this position so he can snoop around, also good!
Must say this paragraph really confused me:
…what? Why?
He’s either dismissed and so doesn’t need an excuse to leave or he stays which apparently he wants to… what?
Aww I didn’t know it before reading it but this feels so like James. Very well done!
Love this: “My stomach's so empty, it’s echoing”
Hmm this gala sounds like the perfect opportunity to poison their target….
Agree that the archives etc sound interesting (and will help them put more faces to names I guess) but that learning more abt the gala in such an easy way is way more useful for them atm!
….and then he immediately dismisses it as a dead end. I guess he took too long to inject himself into the convo. Feels a bit like a missed opportunity all on him…
Do we wanna set up a betting pool on how long it will take until rumours of the new lady in waiting and her dashing chauffeur are spreading? XD
#TrustTheEgg
Ack yeah my chapters for messe duo after the update. I thought it just fixed them?? Maybe something didn't update right. Will do a proper response later am cooking dinner rn lol
hiiii happy review day. go team chickenssss. I fogured this was as good of an excuse as any to actually catch up and boy do i have to do.
So to speak isnt necessary unless they've stepped into Narnia.
A maid*
Looking*
come on up feels very informal for royal servants
good description. Not actually a sentence though....
semi colon should be a colon. Period should be a comma, and She should not be capitalized.
facing the door might feel less lanky than perpendicular.
Went not when
machine or beast seems more accurate
Dont think they had the internet juuuust yet
The question feels like it shouldn't be in thought italics with how its phrased.
I dont think you need both thought italics on this back to back. This one feels stronger to James voice anyway.
But will none of the other rich and famous people be arriving by car? I feel like this would be the one time it WAS an event he could help with.
overall still a lot more typos and grammatical problems that you'll need to clean up. James still feels a little dumb, almost as a way for the reader to learn stuff, but it kinda just makes he seem unprofessional.
~Messy
Dang, darn grammar and typos. The bane of my existence.
i shall add this to my notes as I do my edits! Thanks.
I love the voice of this story! It's very real and I feel like I'm in his shoes with the way you've laid it out -- well done!
This style of writing stayed consistent the entire way through and totally gives me adventure/royal/fantasy vibes for the story. The character James is real and well-thought through. He's cunning, yet makes me laugh because he's a hilariously relatable character. Love him.
Another part that I loved is your speech. Whenever a person is talking, they have a distinct voice that I can almost imagine them sounding like and that's really impressive to write.
good descriptive phrase. Very important key detail to process as the reader, knowing the minds of the royals and how they're set up. This puts the royalty into perspective and how they process newcomers. Very good.
I loved this banter. What a good way to set up humor. It was subtle but definitely there as a play by play of curious statements. It kept me entertained and wanting to read more. Keep it up.
I liked the ending statement, it kept me intrigued and I would want to continue reading further.
Room for Improvement --
Just a small typo
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the quotation marks need to be consistent, " instead of '.
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Overall, very well-written piece. It was captivating, I was obsessed with the characters, and the writing felt clean. There were no clunky sentences, everything felt childish and friendly. Besides the few typos, everything turned out great.
Best regards!
-Jane Amelia
Whoops i never replied to this, sorry! Thanks for this!!
Hello there, human! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today!
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Top Graham Cracker - Verena and James meet the royal family and attend a royal dinner. James is sure to watch what everyone is doing and to ask questions, so as to acquire more useful information later on.
Slightly Burnt Marshmallow - This chapter mentions that this is taking place in the 1900s, but I remember a description of one of the chapters saying that it took place in the 1920s. I think this is supposed to be in the 1900s, but you can correct me if I’m wrong.
Chocolate Bar - I love how you wrote down how observant James is with everyone, especially with Julian, because I feel like Julian is going to be important later on. I also like that he’s still somewhat upset he isn’t somebody of importance, like Verena. That’s a totally understandable feeling lol. I’d rate this a 10 because we got introduced to more of the royal family and we got to see the Prince!
Closing Graham Cracker - Overall, a lovely chapter on more of what these people are like. I am at an 8 for my excitement with the next chapter and I do hope that James will be able to find something of use in the Archives. I enjoyed reading this and…
I wish you a fantastical day/night! ^v^