I don't get some of the "pretty girls"
With pants half up their crack.
Wearing shorts in December,
man I'd hate to see
what they wear
when they want to cool off!
I don't get some of the "pretty girls",
that cheat you out of every point you get.
Just because we're gonna lose,
doesn't mean that you have to cheat us
and make us lose worse!
I don't get some of the "pretty girls"
that only think of themselves
Making my life miserable,
and while they're at it,
why don't they just tick the teachers off?
('Cause They do)
I don't get some of the "pretty girls"
Who's going rather bald,
she's gives a lock of hair,
to every beau she knows!
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Huh? This was a strange piece. First off, I like the title, "Ranting with Style". It got me interested to start reading it but I feel like it's not a rant "with style." Rants to me are long, opinionated, and detailed which was two out of three but I was expecting to see long long long paragraphs. Finally, I think your wording is off or could be stronger and more specific. For example when you say, "I don't get the pretty girls." I thought you meant you don't attract them. Better wording would be "I don't understand the pretty girls."
Hello, im brielle, not to be rude but,What ?? I dont get pretty girls, i am a pretty girl. but thats not how they are. Thats like the Rich snoby girls and the Bad Ghetto girls. If there making your life misrable Thats you stoping them. If you really meant this. Because Ugly girls, are the ones who really do it. But i mean i dont understand this. Are you trying to seem that Girls are prettier than you that you cant get a Boy/MAN. What are you trying to say? and if there like that where you are then they just THOTS (if you know what they are) but you need to put at least some more dicrbition in this because i dont get it at all. Pretty go though more Stuff than the ugly ones. but its cool i just had to get this off my mind while i readd it because it made me upset. and if your trying to be discribable(Excuse my spelling) then you need to Make it seem like more you. like
"There's alot of girls thats prettier than I (or me)."
or "I dont seem why they get boys attention with those shorts up(or in) there ASS"
or "Look at those fast girls or somthing you can put"
Hell you an wear some too. ITs alot you dont know. but Pretty girls get the most hurt. All there trying to do like everyone else is to be in Love. So i dont understand this and i dont have a Guy yet and im prettier that stuff takes time. And you if you think your ugly why? Sorry this just got me at Like WTF ?? but im done now. and i dont mean to be rude but thats how i feel.
Sorry, I was just doing the comparison to some people in my school, I can change the word "pretty" to "snobby" or something like that if you'd like.
Is that better? I didn't mean to offend.
yes it okay