---

by Kaitlin
  • January 1, 2011
  • Poetry
  • Other
  • Poetry
PreviousNext

---

Comments & reviews · 3
Note: You are not logged in, but you can still leave a comment or review. Before it shows up, a moderator will need to approve your comment (this is only a safeguard against spambots). Leave your email if you would like to be notified when your message is approved.

User avatar
Shadowhunter14
Review
Shadowhunter14 wrote a review · Tue Jan 04, 2011 5:37 am

Hey! Good job. loved the title, and the general idea of the poem. About your flow: It seemed very choppy, the way you structured it. It felt a bit more like a story than a poem. Also, the amount of emotions and thoughts that you packed into it made it feel a little heavy, you know what I mean? But I don't really mind it. You had some great metaphors going on though, and the imagery was excellent. So yeah. Well done!

Random avatar
songbird102
Comment
songbird102 commented · Sun Jan 02, 2011 2:51 am

I love the title. I love the fact that you would do that to the title of a post and that is a good way of telling that you care about this stuff.



Anxiety is the dizziness of freedom.
— Søren Kierkegaard