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by Incandescence

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Published November 12, 2005

In Old Poetry

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Tríona
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Tríona wrote a review Review · Nov 12, 2005

:shock: This poem really moves the reader (me)!

Your fragile pencil etches
verse in empty notebooks


The pencil, like the narrators voice in the world, is fragile.

A sense of longing is created in the stanza :

In dreams you are the girl who
lives in Spain, with no doubt
about her identity, her life, her
control. You are the girl with
an iPod who knows how
the world works.


:cry: She wants to be confident and full of life like the girl in her dreams but she cannot....


you're waiting on
the music from the speakers, but
you never plugged them in.


Hauntingly beautiful! :cry: :wink: :cry:

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Tazy
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Tazy commented Comment · Nov 12, 2005

One word wow and yoru only 15 good on you



"You, who have all the passion for life that I have not? You, who can love and hate with a violence impossible to me? Why you are as elemental as fire and wind and wild things..."
— Gone With the Wind