Do You See

I really liked it. It somewhat reminded me of a story I wrote recently, except this is a poem version of it. It's really cool, and it flowed well. Plus, it was an interesting topic. I'm sure that at some point in everyone's life people feel that way. It's short and simple, and I believe that's exactly what it needed to be. So well done!

Yours psychotically,
- thelocalmaniac

"Do you see?()
Against the wall,()
A shadow shaped as she.()
She...()
who is me.()
Me,()
the she no one sees."
This is really interesting! I like the me she stuff. It makes me stop and think! Nice work! The one thing that would turn this from a sentence to a poem is starting a new line where I put the (). Other than that this was really neat!