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Capitalize the first letter of the first word.
Add quotation marks after it.
Semi-colon.
Don't start a sentence with an ellipse.
Read.
"Pride and Prejudice had a unforgettable..."
No comma.
Put these in italics.
Replace the comma with Of.
Period, not a comma.
I liked this ending.
Anyway, good job.