Hello there, @DreamGalaxy! Though you will likely never see this, congrats on being my 75th review!
My first impression is that you are a really skilled poet when it comes to rhythm and rhyme. If I could keep a beat half as well as you do, I'd be proud of myself forevermore!
Apart from a minor spelling error with "becomes" in the Second Stanza, there are no grammatical errors that need to be fixed here!
I really love this poem! You are extremely skilled, and I'll have to check out your others sometime!
Have a nice [*insert time of day here*]!!!
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