Actually, looking back at what I wrote, it takes place in the evening which kind of skips an entire day so maybe it would be best to wait for the white king or another piece to go first, either that or I could add a little at the start to summarise the entire day if that would work?
"Storybooks and roleplays are just for fun!" To which I say: of course! But why only "just"? Sometimes fun is found in the full-send. Sometimes fun is found in taking it seriously, and aiming to do it with excellence! — soundofmind