Young Writers Society

Hello all, Lily here and I’m itching to do some reviewing.
All you need to do is post a link, the name of your piece, and the genre and I’ll get back to you quick as I can.

I’ll review almost anything, really, I will but I have to say that I’m not the best at reviewing poetry but I’m getting better at it than I was before I got here so if nothing else, I’ll give you the best opinion I can.

And if that doesn’t persuade you…there’s a cookie in it for you and possibly a gold star too. *slaps a gold star on her forehead*

~lil

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Detonators, Vengeance, and Plot - Action/Adventure Fiction

Done! Anyone else!

Oh come on, anyone else. *shameless bump*

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Name: Sitting in a Rainbow [1]
Genre: Fantasy/Alternate History

And if you're not too busy:

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Name: Sitting in a Rainbow [2]
Genre: Fantasy/Alternate History

Thanks!

If you can, "Outside".

It's photography. If you don't do photography, that's fine.

This is a piece I have written for the 'Symphony of Colors' contest. It was originally in a paragraph/prose format, and I've made a few tweaks to it. It has been suggested that I should tweak more, but I'm not so sure. I need more opinions! XD Please help me!


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Could you please review this for me? It's the third chapter of a supernatural novel I'm working on. You don't need to review the first two, though if you want this to make more sense you may want to at least skim through them. Otherwise I'm just looking for what you think about my writing style, and nitpicks, and characters and such. Thanks in advance.

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Done, Done, Done, Done and Done. *puts checkmarks on her notebook*

Okay, those all were finished in a day.

Give me more....pwease!

*shameless bump*

please!

Do you do lyrics?

I will do lyrics tnme22 and I also do art and photography.

Cool beans!

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It's kind of a lot, so take as long as you need and I'll be willing to give you as many points as you think is fair in return.
Please tear them to shreds.

Thanks much!

-Carly

Done to the power of 12 tnme22!

Who else??

Merci!
I forgot to put this on my post after your review of group 3, but I always kind of thought of red fish, blue fish as a 1,2,3 feel
Thanks again!

-Carly