You probably don't know who I am. That's fair. I haven't been actively active on this site in ... ohh, about two years.
But when I was, I critiqued. My output isn't always great, but I try to be thorough with stories. Like, really thorough. This is a short critique for me. (This, if you're interested, is a long one.)
I will critique any fiction. That includes fanfiction. I won't critique poetry, photography, scripts, lyrics, whatever. Just fiction.
What I need you to do: Post a link to your story, maybe post a summary. And, most importantly, tell me what you want me to look at. If you're having difficulty with the dialogue, or the characters, and want help with that, let me know. If that's the only thing you want me to look at, let me know. Be specific.
I don't want anything in return. It may take me some time to get the critiques done, but I'll try and get 'em done quickly.
Let the fun begin! : )
Completed Critiques
Pandora's Box, by Snoink
Stop and Smell The Roses, by RGallagher
Prologue - Orilie Davis, by wisemann210
The Elves are Coming, by RGallagher
The 1st Chapter of Paradox Parade - Heirlooms, by SteviexOctopus
Habit, by Jiggity
Top Secret, by RGallagher
Gamma Ray (1), by Firestarter
Last Date., by Icaruss
First page of Sensing Wild, by peanutgallery007
Ghosts, by Mars
Space Adventure: The Star Gauntlet, by Ermixon
Nightly Terrors, by JFW1415
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