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I can't promise I will finish them as soon as you post them. But I can promise them I will finish them soon after I read your request, which will be not be too far after you post them, because I'm on school holidays right now.

I will take:
All forms of poetry. But be warned, If I feel nothing from it, I will probably rip it to shreds.
Action/Adventure
Fantasy Fiction
Historical Fiction
Non fiction essays
Romantic fiction
Other Fiction
Scripts

I will most likely not take anything else, but you can try!

I find that my review are pretty useful for helping not only with grammar, but with the big picture of what you are trying to achieve in your work. I will ofter my opinion as a reader above all else.
Please don't ask me to review multiple chapters: If I like your work I will most likely follow it on with no request necessary.
I don't want anything in return, but thanks are always welcome .

Ducati!

Please could you review the 5th Chapter of Tipping the Velvet? I know that, being awesome, you probably would have gotten to it anyway. But I felt like giving you your first request. xD
Oh, and the 2nd and 4th chapter are edited. Obviously, don't bother reviewing them. But if you're going to understand the references in Ch5 properly, could you please just take a scan of the first part of Ch2, at least. ^ ^

Thankee.

Ducati
If you need anything else to review could you review this ? *pleads*
It is kind of long, but nowhere near as long as the original xD
It's part one, but you asked for us not to dump multiple requests on you so you only have to review part one
It's in other fiction:

Orli and Eden (1)
topic40849.html

Thanks so much xD *hands oodles of cookies *
xxx

Done and done.

Hey, Ducati!

I decided to ask for a favor in return hehe

Okay, I'm not sure if you like vampire stories, but you said you liked Romantic Fiction so hopefully you like that too

I have a story that I have been working on for ages now. It's called Poisoned Roses and I've needed help with it for so long. I just now started to rewrite the whole thing so I need help more than ever.

Here are the links to the Preface and the first three chapters because that's all I have posted so far :

Preface: topic40158.html
Chapter One: topic40343.html
Chapter Two: topic40730.html
Chapter Three: topic40901.html

If you don't get to all of them, that's fine. I'm just looking for another's opinion on it

Thanks in advance!

Hey, I did the Preface and I might do the first chapter but as I said I don't really do multiple chapter requests unless I'm so inclined. I like some vampire stories, and not others.

That all you got?
*Has ominous feeling she will be caught out by being in a different timezone*

I'd like a review on this please ^^ I want to see if I improved from october writing to november.

topic40957.html

Thank you ^^

My historical fiction piece? It's more like made up history fiction. Haha, review?
post478225.html#478225

topic39467.html
Thanks
If you want a review in return, check out my thread.

Done silver sunlight's and angel's symphony's.
Oh and wolf's also.

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