The summer has officially started, and school no longer has an iron grip on my life. I am re-entering the YWS life, so please bombard me with needed critiques so I can get working! I know I haven't been around for a while, but I used to be known as a pretty good critiquer, so try me!
So, interested?
What Will You Critique?
- Any short stories
- Poetry, though not as well as prose
- Chapter one of a novel
What Don’t You Critique?
- No graphic sex scenes
- Pick something - no 'anything at all!'
- Chapter 10 of a novel. You can come back later and ask for 2 after 1, but don't make me just say the same thing over again.
What Are You Good At Finding?
- Grammar/spelling
- Emotions
- Flow
- Realism (needed for all types of writing, including fantasy.)
- Character development
- Description
- Dialogue.
- General atmosphere.
- Character History (with each other, themselves, etc.)
- Atmosphere (the basic things you notice when you first enter a room, like lighting and occupants.)
Eh… maybe more, but that’s off the top of my head. Ask for something, and I’ll keep an eye out for it.
Got Any Examples?
-Wrong or Right<-- Winner of Suzanne’s Best Critique contest!
-Gage
-I Love My Dirt; My Dirt Loves Me
-~Michelangelo's Night and Day~ Chapter One
-Burnt Memories
Have Any Spots Open?
No.
What Critiques Do You Owe?
Jasminebells
Waiting for: 5
Elinor Brynn
Of Lumas
Galazy
The Land of the Faeries
The Last Days of Summer
Waiting for: 1
Bolt
Waiting for: 5
Durriedog
Waiting for: 5
Sunstarfrozenlife
Waiting for: 5
HorseradishCares
Waiting for: 5
peanut19
And The Light Fades
Waiting for: 0
Evi (3)
Waiting for: 3
Lilymoore
The Siring Part 1
The Siring Part 2
Hemlock
Kitties and Coloring Books
I Could Really Use a Wish Right Now Part 1
Waiting for: 0
Esther Sylvester
Waiting for: 5
fiction903
Waiting for: 5
Day
Waiting for: 5
SeleneForeverDream
Waiting for: 5
emoticon220
Waiting for: 5
RazHuni
Song I Heard In A Dream
Waiting for: 4
Vanadis
Waiting for: 5
Forestqueen808
Waiting for: 5
Ninjacookiemonster
The Dreamkeepers Chapter One
The Dreamkeepers Chapter Two
The Dreamkeepers Chapter Three
The Dreamkeepers Chapter Four
Gabriel
Waiting for: 0
Alwaysawriter
Waiting for: 5
Ultraviolet
To Be A Kid Again
Waiting for: 4
Adnamarine (4)
Waiting for: 4
Beckiw
Waiting for: 5
Jon
Waiting for: 5
Calligraphy
Waiting for: 5
Tatra
Waiting for: 5
pinkangel54123
Luna 1.0
Luna 2.1
Luna 2.2
Luna 3.1
Luna 3.2
Waiting for: 0
JustisMarez
Waiting for: 5
AngerManagement
Waiting for: 5
Who Owes You Things?
These are all extremely old, but maybe the people will be nice and allow me to claim them this summer! =]
- Caligula's Launderette - One critique and one fanmix for Third Place in Cal's Something Old contest (Requested: What do you want your fanmix of? Do you want it to focus on certain characters or relationships or plot? Do you have any preferences on color, font, or song choice or song genre? Please send a link or short summary or even just some info on characters, so I am not totally clueless.)
- Clo - One sketch for Honorable Mention in Lost in the Atmosphere contest (Requested: Subject matter - Character? Setting? Basically tell me EXACTLY what the subject/image is; Pen/Pencil; Colored or not; Give me lots of detail)
- KailaMarie - One critique for First Place and Most Creative POV
~JFW1415
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