Young Writers Society

Come on guys; I'm now totally free and need to be doing reviews to keep me happy!!

Anyone for a free review??

Pleaseeee? *beams hopefully*

I would very much appreciate a review of The Last Good Man. It would really be great and would mean a lot.

post505446.html#505446 If you don't mind. Oh and I am always willing to return the favor. Thanks!

How about topic43618.html

here is a little bit about it!

A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!

Maki-Chan, I have done yours (as it was the shortest of the 3 requests) and Moriah Lelia and EmmVeePi I will be posting your reviews hopefully on my next visit!! Thank you for posting your reviewing requests to me also - I appreciate it very much!! =D

--Lucyy xx

Since you did such a wonderful job reviewing my last piece I was hoping that you might take a look at the second chapter. As always I'll be happy to return the favor and critique anything of yours that you want a review for. Thanks again!

Could you please review this for me?

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It's called the Piper's Legend. Please be as harsh as you want.

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody

I know that you already gave me some feedback on the prologue of my story, and I was really happy about that ^^ Could you look over the revised version as well?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic43503.html

Also ... would you be willing to read my chapters before I post them? I'm aware that I could just post them and the guys here would review, but I kinda feel ... safer when I know someone other than me already looked over it ^^
That'd be great

Thanks in advance!

I have to apologise so much about the delay!!
EmmVeePi, My Sunshine, Moriah Lelia and Forever Threndy you're waiting so patiently for me to complete your requests and I really am sorry that I'm taking so long, but I promise you that I am working on your requests in any of the free time I have left!! Also, to make sure I complete these requests some time soon I've temporarily closed this thread, but I will be back and kicking as soon as I can!!
Thank you to all of you for putting your trust in me and asking me to review all your lovely work as well, I love seeing requests made of me

--Lucyy xx

I am now reopening this thread, so let the review requests come flooding in!! *please* =D

Hey Lucyy =]

Please could you review chapter one of my story; Lily Foxglove.

I'd really appreciate it if you could

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Thank you!

xDudettex

Here's the next chapter to my story.

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Okay, I'll be getting to both of your requests as soon as (:
--Lucyy xx

Please, Sir, may I have some more? *cute eyes* ^_^