Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
My, it looks like you've got a bit of a queue going on Do you mind if I add one more?
Heritage Chapter 1.1 It's fantasy, about 1350 words long, and it's a little neglected. I'd be happy to review something of yours in return. At first, I was only putting the story up to have it somewhere other than my computer, but I've learned I can really use the critique!
Thank you very much for your time in advance.
=Hyun
Stop thinking pessimistic thoughts. You will run out.
It's called Cinnamon Rolls on Tuesday. It's an other fiction short story, part I. It's not complete yet, so I'll repost when I've got the whole thing done, I just need to know how it's going so far.
-Shina
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.
The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
OK I'd really like you to see if this is any good. I know something is wrong, but i'm really trying!
Also, i'm not sure how to make a link, so sorry for any mistakes.
Hey Lily. Could you review: topic52291.html ^ Into the Depths, Chapter III, please? You can review Chapter I and II if you want, but you don't have too. I'm just asking for Chapter III because It's the one that needs critiques.
All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them. -- Walt Disney
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