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Name: Already Won Me
Genre: Romantic Fiction
Summary: Basic teenage romance that developed quite abruptly. Just sort of tries, anyway, to show the way an unconventional romance blossoms.
Word Count: 837
Link: post458107.html#458107


This piece already saw several grand reviews but I've heard you're one of the best and I would love to hear what you have to say. So, if you get around to it, I would be honored.



EDIT: This is my revised version.
Name: Already Won Me
Genre: Romantic Fiction
Summary: Basic teenage romance that developed quite abruptly. Just sort of tries, anyway, to show the way an unconventional romance blossoms.
Word Count:1103
Link: post462965.html#462965

Name: Creep- Chapter 1
Genre: Other Fiction
Summary: Beginning of long story about a teenager's quest for revenge in an enchanted city.
Word Count: 2,120
Link http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39468.html

You're probably all like, "Oh my goodness, I'm already reviewing something for this loser!" Well, you can disregard the other thing. It stank, and I'm not going to continue it. This however, I am going to continue and work on, so yeah. If you're turned off by the length that's alright, it won't break my heart. Thanks!

[s]Hi! I wrote this piece and have really been hoping for an up-front review.
I got the inspiration for this while reading through the Book of James, and the Book of Hebrews. Personally, I think whether you're religious or not, you can appreciate the way scripture is written.

Name: Another Day Awake
Genre: Dramatic Poetry
Link: topic39681.html

Thank you so much!


*anti-pop[/s]

So you shud lyk crit my story.


I apologize for that.


The prologue has been pretty well looked over but I will give it to you in case you wish to read it so you know what is going on

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Pwetty pwease?

Just a quick update! Finals are done, so I've started trimming down this pile a bit. I've skimmed through some, read through others, and critiqued a couple. I'm trying to make this a better quality critique than usual, so it's a little slow, sorry. ^^

Also, since I was getting confused on who I critiqued and who I didn't critique and since I'm a mod and can edit posts, I crossed out people who had a finished critique. That way, I can be slightly more organized and have a better idea of them. Nothing else was edited though.

And... I'm not really critiquing linearly, so don't assume that because you're name is next on the list that you'll be critiqued next. I'm jumping around a bit. So just be patient. I haven't forgotten you. Just make sure that your posts are presentable. That way, I can comment more on the content and less on the grammar. I like those sorts of critiques better.

[s]Hey Snoink! This is a piece that I really would like to improve on. I've gotten reviews for it, but they are all positive and telling me that it was very nice, which is always warming to hear, but not exactly what I'm looking for. If you could rip it apart for me I would be very grateful.


Name: Onobserved
Genre: Dramatic Poetry
Link: topic34178.html

Thanks!

--Clue.[/s]

Hey
I shall critique some of your work, I lack in critiques 'cuz I is lazy. But I shall do some

Name: Coins (for lack of a name just now)
Genre: Other Fiction
Word-count: around 400 words
description: I don't really know what it's about yet. It'll probably become something to do with philosophy as I am a philosophy freak. xD

Link: topic41312.html

Don't worry about how long it takes you


~Kirsten
xoxo

Lost_in_dreamland wrote:Hey
I shall critique some of your work, I lack in critiques 'cuz I is lazy. But I shall do some

Name: Coins (for lack of a name just now)
Genre: Other Fiction
Word-count: around 400 words
description: I don't really know what it's about yet. It'll probably become something to do with philosophy as I am a philosophy freak. xD

Don't worry about how long it takes you


~Kirsten
xoxo

Link?

Eeeeeeeeek >.<
I is stupid?
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hey snoink, actually, i think i'd like to work on a different poem. sorry.

Title:Broken Glass
Genre:Lyric poetry
Link: topic41965.html

so sorry, i hope you wont mind. you don't even have to look at the other one if you don't want too.

--very apologetically,
clue.

Hey! Can you critique mine?

Name: Stop and Smell the Roses
Genre: Action Fiction
Summary: A young boy is kidnapped by a serial killer
Word Count: about 2300 words
Link: topic41470.html

Hope you enjoy it!

Title: Blessing and a Curse
Genre: Lyrics
Link: post486598.html#486598

Hey Snoink! I don't think we've met though I guess I'll review some of your work

Name: Guardian Angel (EDIT)
Genre: Other Fiction
Summary: Chap. 1 and Prologue. In full its about a boy who becomes a guardian angel after committing suicide for a girl who is being stalked by a mystery caller.
Word Count: No idea though not that long...
Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42008.html

Thanks so much! Long live piglets!

Name: Cashmoney
Genre: Adventure/Action
Summary: An alcoholic father, a kindapping attempt, a load of cash on a doostep, and a pre-school. Sounds interesting, no? ^^
Word Count: 4,706 words
Link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post506494.html#506494

*snugs* Thanksies!

XxxDo

Name: The Baroness, The Villainess
Genre: sci/fi
Summary: a super-villainess with a lot of time on her hands is perfecting the way to take over the world...and she's dragged Edgar into it, too.
Word count is somewhere around 700
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Peasnthankyou! ^_^