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Tue Dec 30, 2008 1:37 am
Angels-Symphony says...



I'd very much like a review please. I have only one review and I'm new :( Sorry I cannot separate each chapter, but please try to edit around it. Also, I am aware that I have no skills with semi colons ^^ topic40958.html
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Mon Jan 19, 2009 9:40 am
Kalliope says...



Done. Anyone else?
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Sat Feb 14, 2009 3:55 pm
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*dials phone number*

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Yea, I have something I'd love for you to review ! Awesome call centre, this is.

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Huh?

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Yes, I can shut up if you want...


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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post505845.html#505845

It's for the CIA contest.

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Sat Feb 21, 2009 11:01 pm
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Oooh, thanks for calling! ^_^

Next, please!
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Sun Feb 22, 2009 6:18 am
Galerius says...



topic43953.html

It's a lyric poem, titled Pleading to a Wet Sun.

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Tue Jun 06, 2023 8:54 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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