Young Writers Society

If you're really hurting, I wouldn't mind review on all of these. In order from most wanted to least:

Deimos' Custom Vacation
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Thanatos
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Goddess Fallen
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Theodore King
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Umm... that's actually everything I have to offer, at this point. I hadn't realized I had so few things posted!

hi, could you do my second chapter of my book?

the link is in my sig.

thx

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It's Chapter Six of Six, to understand it you might want to read the other five, they take about ten minutes each.

I would like it if you would critique those too but that would bump the post so i would only like Chapter Six.


Thank you

---Jon---

I is lubses yooh foreverz.

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"Sometimes things just break" (or sommat like that, I can't rightly remember the title. xD

*Hearts* Le Penguin.

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Please do critique.
Thanks a TON in advance. I
would really, really appreciate it if you review/critique.

I just revised this last night. I'm calling it my Second Draft. It still needs some work but I can't quite put my finger on what exactly. Rip it to shreds for me.

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Thank ye, oh Gracious Saint!

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Thanks !!

^-^

XxxDo

First attempt at a new style? It needs work, so I am asking people that I know will be brutally honest with me

lol I know I can count on you.

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OverEasy

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It's a romantic fiction piece, hope you don't mind...it is the third part of the first chapter. so hopefully you'll look at the others too

*makes shameless plug for self*

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