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peanut19
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Wed Jun 23, 2010 12:19 pm
peanut19 says... · Wed Jun 23, 2010 12:19 pm
Evi, I love you! Review for me! topic65767.html

Thank you, Evil :)
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Evi
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Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:17 pm
Evi says... · Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:17 pm
So, I'm back from vacation and open for business again!

*poof!*
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blackbird12
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Sat Jul 17, 2010 10:02 pm
blackbird12 says... · Sat Jul 17, 2010 10:02 pm
Could you review this for me? Muchas gracias. :smt003

topic67134.html
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blackbird12
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Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:29 am
blackbird12 says... · Thu Aug 12, 2010 2:29 am
Mind checking this poem out? Feel free to tear it apart, I'm trying to see if it's got potential. Thanks in advance!

topic68151.html
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Evi
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Tue Aug 09, 2011 5:43 pm
Evi says... · Tue Aug 09, 2011 5:43 pm
So yeah. This has been dead for eons, but I'm trying to review again, so come at me, people! Taking any prose or poetry requests.
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.




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Tue Aug 16, 2011 6:29 pm
Twit says... · Tue Aug 16, 2011 6:29 pm
Link: Lady No Soul (2)

Ooo lookit that, I did a hyperlinky.

Genre: Fantasy/crazy alternate history

My cool hyperlinky is to Chapter 2, but you don't need to read or review Chapter 1 if you don't want to--it's just that Chapter 2 is a wee bit bare.
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Mon Aug 22, 2011 9:10 am
Tenyo says... · Mon Aug 22, 2011 9:10 am
Hey Evi!

Could you possibly review this for me? =D

It's chapter two of my novel "Kaeru."

viewtopic.php?t=86326
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Tue Aug 30, 2011 3:59 pm
Twit says... · Tue Aug 30, 2011 3:59 pm
Hello!

Link: topic86855.html
Genre: Um, general, I think? Kind of no-genre.
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Thu Sep 01, 2011 11:06 am
Sins says... · Thu Sep 01, 2011 11:06 am
When you're free, could you check out this for me? (I totally didn't rhyme on purpose then.)

topic86779.html

It's a Fantasy short story. It's a bit all over the place now because I wasn't that serious about it, but I've decided to try and fix it up a bit, so I could do with your help!

Please and thank you!
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Kagi
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Sat Sep 03, 2011 5:42 pm
Kagi says... · Sat Sep 03, 2011 5:42 pm
Hey there Evi,

If you don't mind I'd love an overall opinion on this if you can. It's awfully short, so hopefully it wouldn't take you too long.

Here's the link:
- viewtopic.php?t=86924

Thank you!
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Evi
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Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:21 am
Evi says... · Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:21 am
Yay, popularity! I will definitely take these last requests. But any new ones might want to hold on for a while-- getting a little busy. ;)
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