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Twit
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Thu Mar 17, 2011 12:11 am
Twit says... · Thu Mar 17, 2011 12:11 am
Hey! It's fantasy, so I apologize, and feel free to hand me the mitten if you so wish. :)

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Rascalover
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Thu Mar 17, 2011 1:02 am
Rascalover says... · Thu Mar 17, 2011 1:02 am
All done, who's next? :)
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Rascalover
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Mon Mar 21, 2011 11:49 pm
Rascalover says... · Mon Mar 21, 2011 11:49 pm
Need a review anyone?
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Rascalover
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Mon Mar 28, 2011 11:22 pm
Rascalover says... · Mon Mar 28, 2011 11:22 pm
Anyone?
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Rascalover
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Sat Apr 02, 2011 2:02 am
Rascalover says... · Sat Apr 02, 2011 2:02 am
bump*
Anyone need a review?
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tinkembell
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Sat Apr 02, 2011 9:01 pm
tinkembell says... · Sat Apr 02, 2011 9:01 pm
I'd appreciate it if you could review this post841635.html#p841635
Thanks!
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Rascalover
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Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:40 am
Rascalover says... · Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:40 am
All done, who needs one right now?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Lalaland
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Sun Apr 03, 2011 11:28 pm
Lalaland says... · Sun Apr 03, 2011 11:28 pm
Could you review the first chapter of a possible project for me, please? It's realistic fiction. :) It's a weeny bit long, so I hope that's okay.

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Thanks in advance!
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Rascalover
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Mon Apr 04, 2011 1:01 am
Rascalover says... · Mon Apr 04, 2011 1:01 am
All done :) Who'se next ?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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MiaParamore
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Mon Apr 04, 2011 1:40 pm
MiaParamore says... · Mon Apr 04, 2011 1:40 pm
Me! :P

Here's the piece, and thanks in advance! Turning the Tables (1.1)

Thanks so much! Do tell me if you'll need anything reviewed.
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Rascalover
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Mon Apr 04, 2011 9:24 pm
Rascalover says... · Mon Apr 04, 2011 9:24 pm
All done whos next? :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Rascalover
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Sat Apr 09, 2011 2:58 am
Rascalover says... · Sat Apr 09, 2011 2:58 am
bump :)
Who needs a review ?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Yuriiko
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Sat Apr 09, 2011 10:06 am
Yuriiko says... · Sat Apr 09, 2011 10:06 am
Hey there!

Will you please review this: topic79009.html ?
Thank you. :)
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Jesiica
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Sat Apr 09, 2011 11:23 pm
Jesiica says... · Sat Apr 09, 2011 11:23 pm
Hello, could you please review my short story? topic79089.html

The alternative version is Here: post845697.html#p845697

Thank you :D




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Rascalover
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Sun Apr 10, 2011 4:14 pm
Rascalover says... · Sun Apr 10, 2011 4:14 pm
All done :)

Who's next?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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These were autumn mornings, the time of year when kings of old went forth to conquest; and I, never stirring from my little corner in Calcutta, would let my mind wander over the whole world.
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