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MiaParamore
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Tue Feb 01, 2011 1:42 pm
MiaParamore says... · Tue Feb 01, 2011 1:42 pm
Done! ^_^....For the next request, it might take some time for me to complete it. So please be patient when you post on here.
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LadySpark
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Thu Feb 03, 2011 5:07 pm
LadySpark says... · Thu Feb 03, 2011 5:07 pm
topic75839.html

this is ch. 7 of the magi.
PLEASE REVIEW!
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Shearwater
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Tue Feb 15, 2011 1:45 am
Shearwater says... · Tue Feb 15, 2011 1:45 am
Oy~!
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Hello my dearest!
Could you review this for me?

Thank you!! :3 :3
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ScarletteRose
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Tue Feb 15, 2011 1:59 am
ScarletteRose says... · Tue Feb 15, 2011 1:59 am
Hi!

I was wondering if you could review the first chapter of this: topic76339.html

It's not too long. Just one thousand words or so.

Thankies,
Lette
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MiaParamore
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Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:10 pm
MiaParamore says... · Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:10 pm
I am done with Pointe and Pink's request. I'll try getting to Scarletta by tomorrow, and now I am accepting requests again so please feel free to post some more. ^^_^^
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Next time you point a finger
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fearlessalways13
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Tue Feb 15, 2011 9:39 pm
fearlessalways13 says... · Tue Feb 15, 2011 9:39 pm
Hey there! I'd love for you to check out my first attempt of a novel, "Into Thin Air", as well as my short story, "The Boy and His Moon". I so appreciate your time! Here are the links to each piece:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=74949 (That's the first chapter of the novel.)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=74840 (...and that's the short story.)
"Being fearless isn't being 100% unafraid;
it's being terrified, but you jump anyway." ~Taylor Swift

"Faithless is he who says farewell when the road darkens." ~J.R.R. Tolkien

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Dr. Who
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Fri Feb 18, 2011 4:53 pm
Dr. Who says... · Fri Feb 18, 2011 4:53 pm
Dregan's Path Chapters 1,2....
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MiaParamore
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Tue Feb 22, 2011 5:04 pm
MiaParamore says... · Tue Feb 22, 2011 5:04 pm
Okay, done with Fearless(though I didn't do the short story).

Anyways, sorry, Dr. Who I can't review it since it's very adult. I know I asked you to post it here, but turns out it's more lurid than I believed it to be.


Anyone else fancies a review? I have my exams right now, so you'd have to be patient before posting on here. ANd please, one chapter at a time.
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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MiaParamore
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Mon Feb 28, 2011 1:31 pm
MiaParamore says... · Mon Feb 28, 2011 1:31 pm
Okay, so no one needs a review right now? :wink:
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Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Sins
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Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:07 pm
Sins says... · Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:07 pm
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Could you review the latest part of Stop and Stare for me, please, Shubhi? :) I'd be eternally grateful!

Thanks!
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bookworm27
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Mon Mar 07, 2011 2:08 am
bookworm27 says... · Mon Mar 07, 2011 2:08 am
Here;s the link: viewtopic.php?t=77147
Thanks so much!
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XxMattxX
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Wed Mar 09, 2011 12:35 am
XxMattxX says... · Wed Mar 09, 2011 12:35 am
Would you ever be so kind as to review my new entry? It's a prologue, so it's not too long.
Here is a link....
topic77210.html
Thanks a lot!
Really appreciate it!
-Jojo
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MiaParamore
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Wed Mar 09, 2011 1:36 pm
MiaParamore says... · Wed Mar 09, 2011 1:36 pm
All set and done! ^_^ Anybody else needs a review?
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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MiaParamore
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Sat Mar 12, 2011 8:06 am
MiaParamore says... · Sat Mar 12, 2011 8:06 am
No request? Shubhi feels like a sad panda. :?
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




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MiaParamore
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Sat Mar 19, 2011 6:00 pm
MiaParamore says... · Sat Mar 19, 2011 6:00 pm
Please ask me for reviews. I'm pretty desperate. :wink:
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore



Maybe what most people wanted wasn't immortality and fame, but the reassurance that their existence had meant something. No matter how long... or how brief. Maybe being eternal meant becoming a story worth telling.
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