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Talulahbelle
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Thu Oct 07, 2010 5:13 pm
Talulahbelle says... · Thu Oct 07, 2010 5:13 pm
Hey there! I'm requesting to make you happy!
If you have time could you look at this? Its a novel, but I only have two chapters done so far. Here's the link to the Novel Page. Peas and Carrots!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=677
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Yuriiko
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Wed Oct 13, 2010 10:55 am
Yuriiko says... · Wed Oct 13, 2010 10:55 am
Done all! :D
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BlueShubs
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Thu Oct 14, 2010 11:49 am
BlueShubs says... · Thu Oct 14, 2010 11:49 am
Yuri-chan!

We here-again! Would you mind reviewing this for us when you're free? Thanks a lot in advance and your reviews help a lot.

~BlueShubs




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Tigersprite
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Thu Oct 14, 2010 6:10 pm
Tigersprite says... · Thu Oct 14, 2010 6:10 pm
Could you please review this:

viewtopic.php?t=70702

Thanks in advance!

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Yuriiko
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Sun Oct 17, 2010 8:12 am
Yuriiko says... · Sun Oct 17, 2010 8:12 am
Done! :D
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Jashael
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Sun Oct 17, 2010 3:07 pm
Jashael says... · Sun Oct 17, 2010 3:07 pm
Hi, Yuriiko! Please review "The Lockets" Chapter two. Thank you!!!! =))
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Yuriiko
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Sat Oct 23, 2010 4:56 am
Yuriiko says... · Sat Oct 23, 2010 4:56 am
Done

:D
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Tigersprite
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Sat Oct 23, 2010 9:31 am
Tigersprite says... · Sat Oct 23, 2010 9:31 am
Thanks for reviewing the prologue, could you please review the first chapter of Kiss of Death at: topic71000.html

Thanks in advance,

TIGERSPRITE
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Yuriiko
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Tue Oct 26, 2010 5:25 am
Yuriiko says... · Tue Oct 26, 2010 5:25 am
Done! Anyone else?
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Rascalover
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Tue Oct 26, 2010 6:47 pm
Rascalover says... · Tue Oct 26, 2010 6:47 pm
Do you mind reviewing in the advanced critue forum?
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Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html




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Idraax
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Tue Oct 26, 2010 8:18 pm
Idraax says... · Tue Oct 26, 2010 8:18 pm
Could you review my first chapter, please.http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=71078 Only if you want to, if you don't that's fine.
Check these out please! :)
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Yuriiko
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Wed Oct 27, 2010 5:15 am
Yuriiko says... · Wed Oct 27, 2010 5:15 am
Rascalover wrote:Do you mind reviewing in the advanced critue forum?



Hey, rascalover. I'll try to see if I got enough time for that since this week is going to be filled with exams and projects. :smt001
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Yuriiko
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Sun Oct 31, 2010 11:33 am
Yuriiko says... · Sun Oct 31, 2010 11:33 am
Done

Anyone else?
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Maddy
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Mon Nov 01, 2010 3:28 am
Maddy says... · Mon Nov 01, 2010 3:28 am
Hello Yuriiko!
I was wondering if you'd like to review my novel. (Titled Faith, science-fiction) Both parts of chapter 1 are out. But more chapters will follow.
I would totally understand if you don't want to review each chapter as they are posted. I'm ok with that. But I'm (pretty please?) asking for a review on my first chapter.
Find the chapters on my portfolio. Thanks!
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SilentRain
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Mon Nov 01, 2010 11:55 pm
SilentRain says... · Mon Nov 01, 2010 11:55 pm
Hello, topic71436.html
This is a poem
It doesn't have a title
This you could make a suggestion??

Thanks,

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

Theres always a rainbow after the Rain!!!!!!!



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