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Can you review these two for me?
A Criminal's Heart

Seems like Eternity
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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post675020.html#p675020 It's a fantasy... Pwease? :)
Star light; star bright,
It is time to take flight.
Off I go through the dark of night.
All my hopes and dreams in sight.




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AspiringAuthor: No, that counts as Twilight Fanfic. :P Sorry.

Shubi: I wasn't going to review that first one, because you had plenty of great reviews already! :D And just as I was reading the second one, Kitty did that awesome review to add to Nephthys'. Sorry, friend! I'll make it up to you. :D

Rock: I'm doing yours now!
"You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because you're all the same."

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Done!
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Hey there Mr.Knightly! :)

Can you please review the first chapter of my story?
Just don't expect anything amazing! :lol:

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Thanks.

xoxo Skins :smt002
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Please review chapter 5 of Shades of Violet.

Here it is: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post676473.html#p676473

Thanks you so much Knightley.
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Done, Valentine! :D
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This is the beginning of my story, Chapter 1: Embrace the End.
I don't want to give too much away.. but I'll tell you that it takes place around the years 2050-2055.

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If you could review it, I'd be so grateful.
Thanks!

~tennis
    I'd rather write about this world than live in it
    and I'd rather play music all day
    and read and wander around bookstores
    and watch humans
    but not be one of them.




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Finished, Tennis! I hope it's okay. :D
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Consider reviewing this?

It's a very short poem. :3
I'm back!

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Throw away the prejudice
that fish live in fish bowls only!"




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Okay, Sura! *reviewed*
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Timmy! One of mah favorite boys! Woah you have a lot of requests xD

So here's another one ;).

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Loveyouthanksbye.
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Done, Hope! Thanks for requesting one. :P
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Hey there Knight,
Will you be able to spare a few moments and review this?
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It's going to be moved into fan-fiction, I think. Anyway, it's themed on goosebumps. :)
Thanks!
-If at first you don't succeed, then skydiving definitely isn't for you!
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This awesome post bought to you by me. :)




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All set, Maddy!
"You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because you're all the same."

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Every generation laughs at the old fashions, but follows religiously the new.
— Henry David Thoreau