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Writersdomain · 2009-10-14T04:24:14Z

Hello all! This is WD. I am always taking review requests! Post here with the title of the piece, a link, the genre and anything you would like me to keep an eye out for or pay attention to . I may not get to your piece immediately, but I will find time eventually, so do be patient with me. I do not rush through reviews. :wink: A little bit about my reviewing : I review mostly prose. Fiction, to be specific. I write in the genre of Fantasy Fiction most often, so that is my specialty, but I will take requests to critique any genre of fiction except Fanfiction (though I reserve the right to deny a request if a piece is rated R and I do not feel comfortable reviewing it). I cannot commit to reading every chapter of an ongoing story, but if I begin critiquing a story, I will attempt to keep up with it. I'm more likely to follow the story if I see you improving. :wink: I'll review your piece in whatever way I think wil be most helpful, whether that be nit-picking or general points that need to be touched on. Feel free to request character impressions from me; I understand how useful they are. :wink: I don't mind gentle reminders about critiques, but I do have a lot of college work, so be patient, okay? :wink: I will also critique poetry if you ask me to, but I have not critiqued poetry in a long time, so you're better to seek out someone else, I reckon. :wink: For examples of my reviews, just go under Lit Comments in my profile. You'll see all the reviews I've ever done. :wink: Happy writing, everybody!

pudin.junidf

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Points 16930

Reviews 180

Tue Jan 12, 2010 1:29 am

pudin.junidf says... · Tue Jan 12, 2010 1:29 am

Hi WD!!

Do you think you can review this for me?
Is called A Demon Sits Behind Me at School.

Thaks, so much!

Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.
Verlaine

Elinor

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Points 1030

Reviews 1260

Tue Jan 12, 2010 3:20 am

Elinor says... · Tue Jan 12, 2010 3:20 am

Hi WD
Could you please review this non-fiction piece I wrote, please?
Sixth Period

All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them.
-- Walt Disney

Writersdomain

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Points 13816

Reviews 563

Tue Jan 12, 2010 5:28 pm

Writersdomain says... · Tue Jan 12, 2010 5:28 pm

Done and done. :wink:

~ WD
If you desire a review from WD, post here

"All I know, all I'm saying, is that a story finds a storyteller. Not the other way around." ~Neverwas

foxfire

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Points 7979

Reviews 111

Wed Jan 13, 2010 7:07 am

foxfire says... · Wed Jan 13, 2010 7:07 am

Hi Wd can you review a short story i had made...

its called, Ante-Purgatory

John McClane: Drop it. It's the police.
Tony: You won't hurt me.
John McClane: Oh, yeah? Why not?
Tony: Because you're a policeman. There are rules for policemen.
John McClane: Yeah. That's what my captain keeps telling me

cosby

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Points 2105

Reviews 16

Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:28 am

cosby says... · Wed Jan 13, 2010 11:28 am

Please will you review my story please? (You might want to read the Prologue and Chapter 1 first)

Dark Tide - Chapter Two

Thank you!

- From the moment I picked your book up until I laid it down I was convulsed with laughter. Some day I intend reading it -

- If the doctor told me I had 6 minutes left to live, I'd type faster -

I laugh at my own signature. Sad? Yes.

Writersdomain

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Points 13816

Reviews 563

Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:25 pm

Writersdomain says... · Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:25 pm

Done and done! Hope that helped!

~ WD
If you desire a review from WD, post here

"All I know, all I'm saying, is that a story finds a storyteller. Not the other way around." ~Neverwas

Young gun

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Points 4518

Reviews 115

Thu Jan 14, 2010 10:45 am

Young gun says... · Thu Jan 14, 2010 10:45 am

Do you review photography also?

viewtopic.php?t=56116

Thank you.

Too bad we don't live to experinece death

Writersdomain

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Points 13816

Reviews 563

Thu Jan 14, 2010 4:44 pm

Writersdomain says... · Thu Jan 14, 2010 4:44 pm

Haha, I am completely useless at photography, but I commented anyway. Hope that helps at least a little bit. :wink:

~ WD
If you desire a review from WD, post here

"All I know, all I'm saying, is that a story finds a storyteller. Not the other way around." ~Neverwas

Maddy

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Points 5950

Reviews 75

Fri Jan 15, 2010 12:52 am

Maddy says... · Fri Jan 15, 2010 12:52 am

Hey WD, i'd love if you could review a piece of my story. What to look out for is writting on the post.

Sparrowhawk Soar (a excerpt 3/4 way through the novel)
post644561.html

Thanks!

-If at first you don't succeed, then skydiving definitely isn't for you!
-"Careful with that light at the end of the tunnel, it might be another train coming."

This awesome post bought to you by me.

Ermixon

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Points 1384

Reviews 12

Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:41 am

Ermixon says... · Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:41 am

Could you please review this fantasy story for me?

topic57095.html

Thanks

Feel free to let me know if ever you want a return favor.

Writersdomain

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Points 13816

Reviews 563

Wed Jan 20, 2010 1:45 am

Writersdomain says... · Wed Jan 20, 2010 1:45 am

Done and done! My apologies for my slowness of late!

~ WD
If you desire a review from WD, post here

"All I know, all I'm saying, is that a story finds a storyteller. Not the other way around." ~Neverwas

Elinor

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Wed Jan 27, 2010 1:30 am

Elinor says... · Wed Jan 27, 2010 1:30 am

Hi WD can you please review this short beginning of a fantasy piece?

The Descent

All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them.
-- Walt Disney

Writersdomain

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Points 13816

Reviews 563

Thu Jan 28, 2010 11:49 pm

Writersdomain says... · Thu Jan 28, 2010 11:49 pm

Done!

~ WD
If you desire a review from WD, post here

"All I know, all I'm saying, is that a story finds a storyteller. Not the other way around." ~Neverwas

fluteluvr77

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Reviews 107

Sat Jan 30, 2010 9:55 pm

fluteluvr77 says... · Sat Jan 30, 2010 9:55 pm

Will you review Small Steps for me? Thanks!! <3
Link - post650953.html#p650953
Genre - Romantic Fiction
It's a short story, so yeah...
It's for Jared's contest, so anything specific about the tone of teh piece will be greatly appreciated.

Peace, love, and chocolate,
Flute Loops<3

Love is the answer to life yet the slowest form of suicide.
Love is a paradox.
And that's why we love it.

Got YWS?

Writersdomain

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Sun Jan 31, 2010 1:04 am

Writersdomain says... · Sun Jan 31, 2010 1:04 am

Done, m'dear!

~ WD
If you desire a review from WD, post here

"All I know, all I'm saying, is that a story finds a storyteller. Not the other way around." ~Neverwas

When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind

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