Thanks so much for the review, I really liked your suggestions - especially about describing the scent of the house & more of the boy's appearance. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
"It's a beautiful thing, the destruction of words." - Orwell, 1984.
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Pippie! You have got to say I'm your biggest requester 'cause I'm here for another one. Would you mind reviewing chapter 2 of Unclaimed? Just click on the link of my previous post and check the related items thing. I don't have the link because I'm on my PSP. Thanks! I just really like to hear your opinion
Piglet: How do you spell love? Pooh: You don't spell it. You feel it.
Done Kat! ^^ Thank you for asking for another one of my reviews I'm really glad you like them and I always enjoy reading your stories! I'm really liking the storyline- hope you write more soon!
"Your mother is a hamster and your father smells of elderberries"
-Monty Python and The Holy Grail
Done Lord Anzius!! I thought it was a really great piece, I didn't have much to comment on at all
Just a note aswell to everyone to say I'm giving YWS a rest, I haven't properly been on here in quite a while now and I feel I'm not really living up to my instructor duties. I may come back in future but for the time being at least I don't think I'll be doing any more reviews I will miss you guys and I've posted in the deparrture thread for anyone to see!
Bye everyone and thank you for appreciating my reviews!
Pippiedooda xxx
"Your mother is a hamster and your father smells of elderberries"
-Monty Python and The Holy Grail
When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind. — Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind